Ok lets get this straight. Young is a girl. But heres my vote.

Jmob- you had a lot of content, but was still a weak verse. You punches were played out and not effective at all. It had a pretty decent flow, and alright structure, some played but shaky metas. No vocab or personals.

Young- You came with a decent structure, some iight flow and some ok punches. It was not all that good though. You have to work on getting metas in there along with some personals. I see how ya tried to get at his name, but it didnt really work. You had and alright flow.

Ok, this was a close yet wack battle. I would have to say you tied in every aspect you could, but you both didnt have vocab. Youngstar* came with weak but the only personals. So i have to give this to Young for having personals. Elevate both ya'll, Good newbie battle.

V/ YoungStar*

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aight we need more votes...g00d battl3 j-mob..may the best man or woman win

im givin this one to star flowed better 420 represent

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^ Quik, you have to explain better or your vote wont count.

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very very tight here but my vote goes to j-mob for better punches,flow and personals but multis and vocab goes to youngstar.
v/j-mob

im give this one to youngstar, his structure was beta and i enjoyed readin his verse
j-mob ya verse was good but it was a bit long and dragged on at the end - make it more to the point and snappy dog time, and u mite get the win.

vote - youngstar

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o and can u hit this battle pls
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117127

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i give ups to both of ya'll ur flows where nice but that last one youngstar spit took this shit

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Im the Illest and that being why is because im from the Illstate or i should say Chi ill beat you with one eye closed step up and get your ass toast

yall finna loose like a 7 on the second roll--
i see more trix in the game than a cereal bowl--
bag on a bitch like im doin, maybe youll get recognition--
but you stuck steady lookin more stupid than r.kelly in ignition

nice lines i think both of yall were even but J came with alot more personals and punchlines he came off harder and I thought he spit the truth
just by these two lines by both were tight
J just came with more game

and tha MOB don't mean a shit
means to sit, ur flo is means to spit
all ova ya bodi, afta i blast ya dome
i have gold on ma car cuz i don't mess wit chrome

Vote=J-Mob

yall keep doin your thing

yo man youngstar won that shit. no beef j-mob your shit looked good but once i started reading i was like what the fuck. youngstar is rite that your ryhmes were simple there and you got to put more power in it. you get em next time. today ain't your day.

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DAMN!!

J-Mob came with some heat

I think just the fact that that fool came up with all that shit is tight

but lets get this straight

Flow =J
Struc=Y
opener=J
closer=Y
metas=Y
personals=J
multis=J

4-3
vote J-Mob

nice battle

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J-Mob we did it dawg....we battled...UPPIN
we done got it goin let's git it movin
GO VOTE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117704
YoungStar* vs Chalk Clorox

Lets Get Some Votes Lets Close This Already

Uppin For Some Votes

Nice Sweep On That Chalk Kid Dogg

You Took That One Even Though It Wasnt Your Best