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5 | 83.33% |
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1 | 16.67% |
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Afterword vs. Accomplishment
IP: CE13 565F
yo no more than 16 bars
handle yo buis ill spit "Afterword"
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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst" bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1) Help me close these/ and I will help U an EYE 4 an EYE http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271 ![]() |
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IP: 2213 AC01
Yo Dis Goes Out to My CLAS SIC Crew Holla
AIght Speak-da-truth cuz my verses openin da keys-to-ur-lose, punches bustin ya like series of Bruce-lee-moves... After Punches light him on fire just so i can be Heatin-his-bruise.../ Punches to ya face rearaingen got ya nose so big call you goofy... dumb shit runnin at me wit a match cuz i told him to bring-da-heat-to-me.../ getcha verse but my lines inclined to get ya ass diverted... ya scoopin "icecream" on yo rhymes cuz i said ya flow was "desserted".../ Rhymes-heatin not unusual to take this man its your ordinary-beatin... Fist to Face-Meatin the "after"math of dis blast is more than just a "mild-readin".../ The way you lookin is unnatural, you backin fool as i bring this wrath-to-you... Un-restrained you maintain a constan beatin, its inhumane how dis is da last-for-you yo dats it drop yo verse |
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IP: CE13 565F
yo im not analyzin yo verse b/c theirs no need 4 me too
but i will post my shit in a minute, b/c im at work brb
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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst" bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1) Help me close these/ and I will help U an EYE 4 an EYE http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271 ![]() |
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IP: CE13 565F
im back, just got a minute free from work
checkin in ill post shortly
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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst" bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1) Help me close these/ and I will help U an EYE 4 an EYE http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271 ![]() |
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IP: CE13 565F
Check-it
Yo here I am, the accomplice to yur malicious murder So reminisce on yur accomplishments b/c yur career is over You have a better chance at, Facing a cattle with cataracts/ Then defeating me in a battle rap I’m like a gat, you can’t handle that! / So save yur chitter-chat, Stop commin weak like a female/ Yur flows lack facts, and detail So im here to derail, yo train/ And watch as I prevail without pain, B/c I’m slightly deranged in da brain Yo whole image is dying to change B/c u flow like turbulence on planes But don’t worry accomplish-less you will learn, in-due-time/ You should apply for Nextel, By the way you Boost rhymes/ So we all know yur a biter, please stop this All credit to yur ghost-writer I know he writes hott shyt, but wen u drop it, It’s sounds like nonsense So the lyrics could’ve been fire, but u make em sound tired And that is all you have accomplished now can we get some votes uppin peace
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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst" bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1) Help me close these/ and I will help U an EYE 4 an EYE http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271 ![]() |
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IP: CE13 565F
lets get it poppin in this bizznatch
uppin and ill peep out yo battle just leave a link
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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst" bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1) Help me close these/ and I will help U an EYE 4 an EYE http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271 ![]() |
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"Ya'll Must've Forgot"
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IP: 7C40 358D
yo uppin for votes on dis one right hurr i'll return da fave
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IP: 4C8F 0F5D
Accomplishment Had Way Better Structure, Flow, Creativity, Punches, WordPlay & Vocab... So That's Why My Vote Is With accomplishment.. And "NO" This Is Not A "D/R Vote" ....!!! Just To Clear That Up
Afterword: Your Flow Was Hot, But You Had Lack Of Punches... And WordPlay Not To Mention Vocab!!! But Good Use Of Multies I Give That To You Playa Vote: Accomplishment!!!!!!!
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IP: FD47 43D3
so.....heres the rundown
Flow:Afterword Vocab:After Multis:Accomplishment Lyrics:After Open:Accomplishment Closer:Accomplishment Wordplay:Accomplishment Stucture:After Since you both tie on fields of greatness I gotta give my vote to Afterword just cuz I could sit here and actually rap those lyrics and it sounded good!! VOTE-AFTERWORD
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step up and get merked cuz i take care of bidness/ A killa without witness from the start to the finish/ you're fallin off like you came down with tha sickness/ cuz when you step to tha Phreak I'm gonna leave you dickless ![]() ![]() HASTA LAVISTA MUTHAFUCKA!!! A-1 Lyricists |
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"Ya'll Must've Forgot"
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IP: 2213 AC01
yeah ok stillu ppin real votes yo
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IP: D48A 3FE4
This shit is close.
Acclomplishment - Pros -Good meta4's, multies Clever verse, good opener and finisher Cons - It didn't flow well It seemed like separate section joined together After - Pros - Good vocab Good flow Good links between punches Cons - Puches weren't hitting hard as your opponant They weren't as clever, multies not as good Verdict - Afters sounded better to read but i've got to give it to accomplishment clearly for the clever punches. Repay the favour. we all need votes. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117125
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"Ya'll Must've Forgot"
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IP: 2213 AC01
yo still upppin for votes thanx dawg
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 1B38 DB3F
now first off to both thast shit wsas ill and the punches were great
but acompliss your shit ws great easy to flow and good punches say for afterwood now my vote goes to acompliss for bettewr punches |
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"Ya'll Must've Forgot"
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IP: EE44 F094
yo thanx for da votes man two more get it closed
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"Ya'll Must've Forgot"
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IP: EE44 F094
Uppin For Votes Mane......................................
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