let da best mc win.

if you think you can beat me
let me tell no luck,
you have'nt even posted
but i can tell your rhymes suck/
so i think you should stick
to your ABCs,
cuz your not fit me
a lyrically genius mc/
and i'm not even tryin
i'm goin easy on you son,
cuz if i used my full potenial
you'll probally piss on yourself and run/
your 18 years old
but i can make you feel like your two,
do you see da kind of damage
my rhymes do./
n/e ways yo
i'm finna drop dis flow,
cuz dere's no need to spend 25 mins on ho./

ok i'm done yo.and no hard feelins right?

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"We live by Da R.I.P., We kill by Da R.I.P., We die by Da R.I.P."
- Da R.I.P. Anthem

yo quick punch where da f**k are you.your time is up spit or quit it's dat simple yo.hurry da f**k up

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"We live by Da R.I.P., We kill by Da R.I.P., We die by Da R.I.P."
- Da R.I.P. Anthem

hold the fuck up....anyways im here...had 2 do some shit besides sit here and fake battle...so here it is

here what is.you gave me a time limit so it's olny fair you have one too.you need to stop writin your shit down and jus spit.i would like fo dis battle to be over before i turn 90.

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"We live by Da R.I.P., We kill by Da R.I.P., We die by Da R.I.P."
- Da R.I.P. Anthem

yo hold on...i gotta do some shit...i'll post b4 6 my time....srry but u'll just have 2 wait...this is important...take it for wht its worth....~1~

I CANT BELIEVE U WERE TALKIN SHIT...FUCK IT HERES WHAT I GOT...PPL DONT SLEEP ON THISYou're dreaming if you think youll ever wallow in wealth,
Rip your lips over your head and make you swallow yourself

so if you need help with rhymin you can PM me
Your lines aren't sincere, they just pretend to offend me

ive spat 4 lines so far and u feelin like a lil whore
how the fuck can I loose 2 bitch who’s IQ is as low as a retards test SCORE?

Ur name is young kidd cause u love that sensation
Of constant masturbation, why u even spittin? When masturbation is ur full time occupation

U can commit suicide many times 2 try 2 beat me
But why kill urself over and over when u can neva reach me

I took my time 2 write this spit
Just so It’ll be good enough for u when u steal it and sell it 2 make a profit

U bitch as nigga don’t eva try catch something u cant catch
Its writtin in the prophecy UR NO MATCH

Sorry the real shit got mixed up with wht i had 2 say at the beginnin

You're dreaming if you think youll ever wallow in wealth,
Rip your lips over your head and make you swallow yourself

so if you need help with rhymin you can PM me
Your lines aren't sincere, they just pretend to offend me

ive spat 4 lines so far and u feelin like a lil whore
how the fuck can I loose 2 bitch who’s IQ is as low as a retards test SCORE?

Ur name is young kidd cause u love that sensation
Of constant masturbation, why u even spittin? When masturbation is ur full time occupation

U can commit suicide many times 2 try 2 beat me
But why kill urself over and over when u can neva reach me

I took my time 2 write this spit
Just so It’ll be good enough for u when u steal it and sell it 2 make a profit

U bitch as nigga don’t eva try catch something u cant catch
Its writtin in the prophecy UR NO MATCH

yo some1 vote on this....ITS MY 1ST BATTLE.....so im uppin for votes....and young kidd no hate goes 2wards u...but learn 2 have patience......UPPIN YALL UPPIN....~1~

Aight Aight...

Young Kidd: 3/10
Structure Was Wack, Just Need To Elevate All I Can Say. Work On Dem Mulits, Metaphors, Punches, Flow, and Structure. We All Started Sumwhere, Good Luck Pimpin.

QuikPunch: 6/10
Aight, Well Nice Punches, Sum Lines Were Weak But I Gotta Give Props Where Due. Even Though You Pissed Me Off, I Still Gotta Vote Fairly. Work On Your Multis and Metaphors.

Vote-QuikPunch

Battle Me Bitch!

~R~

lol thanks man...but not battlin any1 till im at least where u r...im sayin right now u better than me cause u got 9-0 and shit...not that im scared...but i just wanna work on a lil somethin b4 i step up 2 u....thnks for bein honest even tho i pissed u off!

yo quick dat rhyme was tight yo.you went work there .good battle man.

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"We live by Da R.I.P., We kill by Da R.I.P., We die by Da R.I.P."
- Da R.I.P. Anthem

Yo young kid has potential but you dropped a weak verse son but you'll improve stay at it.
Quik punch wasn't sick but he was good enough to win this battle nice verse though son you'll get better everytime you drop, stay up.
Vote: Quik

Holla back for a nigga
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117887

4/10 4 da kidd
7/10 quick punch
young kidd u had some simple shitt look like u aient come in full effect
quick punch had some shit 4 u dawg next time u gotta come harder
nice battle on and off but quick punch stole dis 1 away vote=quick punch

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this is a no brainer, quickpunch takes this hands down. He came harder with most everything, punches, multies, flow, personals. While on the other hand, young, not only came weaker, but extremely weak in the areas of flow, punches, mulites.

v/quick