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04-09-04, 09:54 PM
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threat
IP: E813 77AB
chorus or whatever the fuck its called..
im a lethal threat, it is i the one you met, as i leave you all dead all for a bet my fucking rap.. mother fucker, im the warlord, calling your bitch a whore, whom do you adore? ill slap that bitch and take her money aint no joke this aint no funny slapping you fags you cant be cant be living so u rest in pee |
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04-09-04, 09:57 PM
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IP: 7498 8326
lol @ da last 2 lines
flow was ok was short I suggest you elevate work on VOCAB! I think ur flow could of been better tho try lengthing ur bars
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04-09-04, 10:05 PM
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IP: 7498 8326
u probably dont even kno the difference between whack and dope
I think dis piece fits in whack
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04-10-04, 06:45 AM
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I have a lot to learn...
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IP: 80D6 7866
wow, you guys criticism sure is constructive... lol
I guess he deserved it for thinkin he was the shit... but... ELEVATE!!!!!!! u need to work on flow and vocab... go read some other stuff see how other mcs do it. you now:  you after elevation::  see?
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