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You couldn’t roll with my crew if your shoes was wheels ’Cause I roll top down in a mad whack, hand it back, Tan/Black Cadillac Coupe Deville And I'll shoot to kill, my rhymes skills is ill I’ll leave you on floor, nine mills‘ll kill I speak a lil’ Brazil and the word of the Christ Don’t you think I’ll hesitate to fuckin’ murder you twice Cheeseburgers and rice, bitch, you can call me Obie if you scurred (scared) of the Trice Prepurr (prepare) to be ice, cold, when I leave you in a pool of blood ’Cause I come up with hotter rhymes, that’ll burst water lines, and cause the school to flood Whos and whats, when, where and why That’s the W5, bitch prepare to die ‘Cause it’s a fact that you better, bring gats and Berettas Boy, you walk around the party like you tryin’ to find ass But you couldn’t find your dick with a magnifying glass I've had it up to here, I’m fuckin' sick of this rage I’ll rip your Face Off like you Nicholas Cage Constricting a page, I got a record deal You spit like a beginner, I got extra skill You best believe the fuckin’ pain is real When you staring down the barrel of my stainless steel I’m trained to kill, if you step to me I’ll murder you with lyrical weaponry And have you so shook that you pissing your pants When I come up here with fuckin’ disses and rants, man I’m sicker than backhands, to strippers who lap dance Fuck scissors, you can call me Edward Gat-Hands I’ll murder you backwards, like I’m Ripper the Jack, man I ain't no gansta but I rep the street Don't even grab the mic, just accept defeat |
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