Concrete to spit first
10-12 lines
no crew
no dick riding
no hate
verses due within an hour

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Aight....

Kingz should get his fact 'straight', cause he should really be called 'Queenz'/
Don't 'retaliate' or I'll fucking rip off your 'spleen' right off your CPU 'screen'/
If you'd enoy more victories, I suggest you use more delete and 'backspace'/
Your fucked when I drop like 'prisoner's soap', so try not to get ya ass~raped/
Nobody enjoys your ridiculous 'garbage', faggot you'll never be 'hard~bitch'/
I'll fucking crush up your brain and your head, and then shatter ya 'carcass'/
I'll burn you up with fire and pyro, why do you think they also call me 'arson'/
'Concrete' only 'causes defeat', so start 'repeating' my lines if wanna 'win'/
Start spitting more 'talented' lines if you don't wanna be brutely 'finished'/
Kingz should be named 'Pac-Man', cause this bitch eats 'balls for a living'!!/

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Battle Record
0-1
Wins-
Losses-Kingz
KOs-

~What goes around, comes around~

Lyrical Crooks:fuck wit us, ya get shook up an book up in tha I.C.U.

My bad where it says enoy it should be, enjoy

Uppin on Kingz

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Battle Record
0-1
Wins-
Losses-Kingz
KOs-

~What goes around, comes around~

Lyrical Crooks:fuck wit us, ya get shook up an book up in tha I.C.U.

Dog that was sick in a 'disease' way….you need an 'elixir'*
They way I am gonna mess you up…they should call me a ‘concrete’ mixer

You step to me in RB…im gonna destroy you leaving no trace
cos you could say that this ‘concrete’…has ‘set’ in the wrong place
(my territory)

in your sig it says ‘what goes around, comes around’…yeh that’s true
but as for wins…it looks like they aint came around to you

see ya vocab consists of gay and queen jokes…dog they are played
I’ll carve my name into you with my blade…you jus a masquerade*

My ‘punches’ hit so hard, you wont know what hit ya
Leave you ‘rattled’…like a ‘King’ Cobra bit ya

And as for personals…they aint even a threat…you for from a vet
You from ‘Virgin’ia…so I guess you haven’t got that ‘personal’ yet

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elixir* - a substance believed to cure all ills
masquerade* - pretend to be someone or something that you are not

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Nice verse dog

give you props

uppin for votes

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Battle Record
0-1
Wins-
Losses-Kingz
KOs-

~What goes around, comes around~

Lyrical Crooks:fuck wit us, ya get shook up an book up in tha I.C.U.

i would say punches: kingz
flow: kingz
bes line for kingz:
My ‘punches’ hit so hard, you wont know what hit ya
Leave you ‘rattled’…like a ‘King’ Cobra bit ya
best line for concrete:If you'd enoy more victories, I suggest you use more delete and 'backspace'/
Your fucked when I drop like 'prisoner's soap', so try not to get ya ass~raped/
my vote goes to:::: kingz

kingz had it his punches where harder. I also liked all of the multies he used.

best line;Dog that was sick in a 'disease' way….you need an 'elixir'*
They way I am gonna mess you up…they should call me a ‘concrete’ mixer

worst line;And as for personals…they aint even a threat…you for from a vet
You from ‘Virgin’ia…so I guess you haven’t got that ‘personal’ yet

concrete u were good to but i didnt like ur flow it was to confusin

Best line;If you'd enoy more victories, I suggest you use more delete and 'backspace'/
Your fucked when I drop like 'prisoner's soap', so try not to get ya ass~raped

worst line;I'll burn you up with fire and pyro, why do you think they also call me 'arson'/
'Concrete' only 'causes defeat', so start 'repeating' my lines if wanna 'win'/

alright..i gotta give this ta kingz cuz....all his words rhymed..and hey concrete....finish doesn't rhyme wit living...

damn good battle y'all both of y'alls punches hit hard, damn this is hard:

concrete: nice opener
Kingz should get his fact 'straight', cause he should really be called 'Queenz'/
Don't 'retaliate' or I'll fucking rip off your 'spleen' right off your CPU 'screen'/
that was hard, ya structure and flow was on the money 8/10

kingz: nice personal
Dog that was sick in a 'disease' way….you need an 'elixir'*
They way I am gonna mess you up…they should call me a ‘concrete’ mixer
that shit was flipped nicely, then there was this
in your sig it says ‘what goes around, comes around’…yeh that’s true
but as for wins…it looks like they aint came around to you
tight verse also, 9/10

it was close as hell but i'm go with kingz just because his punches and personals hit a little harder, close though, probly coulda gone either way

win:kingz
return da favor y'all
"nuttin personal, just business"
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118529
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117079

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Damn, 4-0 already, you gonna get the KO forsure.....................

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Battle Record
0-1
Wins-
Losses-Kingz
KOs-

~What goes around, comes around~

Lyrical Crooks:fuck wit us, ya get shook up an book up in tha I.C.U.