yo check it DaClassic pulled it out in our first battle wit a 5-1 win
but i'm confident i can bring it in the rematch so here it is

FRANCHIZE vs. DACLASSIC
THE REMATCH

Rules
30 mins max 2 spit after check in
10-20 lines max.
no crew
no d/r
no hate
***NO FEEDIN OFF VERSES***

I'm a spit first!!

checkin in

i'm ready 2 spit so here it is

Startin off from our first battle……………………..

Classic asked tha question am I a business organisation//
U damn straight I’m ‘Da’ billion-dollar ‘Classic’ corporation//
I am rap origination, ure just a classic miscreation//
I didn’t need ure admiration, cuz u already full of infatuation//
I’m the complete rap generation, this isn’t a hallucination//
This shit is getting red hot like its DaClassic’s fuckin cremation//
I betta stop and take a drink before I drop from dehydration//
That’s what happens when multis experience multi-plication//
I’m smoother than white chocolate, franchize is the vanilla thrilla//
My rhymes are automatic just like jumpshots from Reggie Miller//
Classic beat me first, I never knew miracles could happen//
Cuz his wack ass spit belongs in the place I take a crap in//
He claims to be a genius with a super high I Q//
I think DaClassic has been sniffin to much crazy glue//
He may be known, but only for always introducing him-self//
It’s only cuz he knows he’s about to be put on the retirement shelf//
With my truly dominatin skillz this battle will surely go-quick//
And I guarantee he’ll leave a true fran-chize-a-pho-bic.//

checkin...........................yall bout to witness history. l

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Blue Print

B.P.

Ladies and Gents welcome to this franchize's going out of business sale, every thing 50% off, except for The Classicitems.

It's time for shut down.

Franchize you should be lucky your ass is even an organism
Why you feed off of my lyricism, When you lacking metabolism
My punches will diss him, What is the reason you had to call it?
My lyrics of wisdom will damage your tissue down the toilet
I couldn't recall it, Beginning of lyrical leaders fraternity?
Whose this franchize player, I'll place him on the bench for eternity
Your hurting me, Stop changing your vocab its making me sick
You lacking the vocab to write dialogs for a porno flick
You're not yourself today. Improvement I noticed immediately
I'm talkin bout from never rapping, To the level of never beating me
This piece of garbage is blocking my road to lyrically improve
If I told you that I have a piece of dirt in my eye, would you move?
I'll leave u terrified, But first something needs to be clarified
You claim yourself the truth, But u aint a fact that been verified
Spots are taken at my elevation center, Finding one is rare
Stupidity does not qualify as a handicap, So park elsewhere
Nobody cares so beat it, Career deceased, Your now defeated
Franchize i'll treat your ass like a mistake, You'll get deleted

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Blue Print

B.P.

votes are based on honest opinions. i gave this dude a rematch because he so sure i didnt take it easy on him in the first battle which i did? believe me go peep it for yourselves. but vote on this battle people. and other battles shall get voted on peace.

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Blue Print

B.P.

opener classic
flow clasic fran u got vocab but it didnt really flow 2 well
punches classic
personals tie good job to both
multis franchize
closer tie both were played i felt classics a lil more though
vote clasic he came hard fran u had nice vocab and ok multis and thats about it

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this was a good battle franchize it looked like your first 2 or 3 bers were just filler to show off your multies...in my opinion use multies when dissing him brings a lot more intensity to your verse after those first bars tho u got into your flow and everything came out better...nice structure good wordplay good multies good punches overall u had a good verse
franchizes verse 7/10

daclassic i felt had a good opener but there was filler in his verse too not as much as franchize but u still had some good multies and punches...your verse was overall a easy read which is good and u lacked in ill punches but there were punches i would have to say that you tried to hard..but your last 2 bars were sick i was feelin them..great originality..good verse

daclassic's verse: 8/10

vote:daclassic overall good verses from both..but i think the last 2 bars won it for daclassic...good battle

~1~

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this is kind of funny. cuz this dude said no feeding but he fed off off of my verse in the first battle we had. especially those first four lines. now if i was to feed off of his verse in out first battle i would of lost. lol he tried to beat me with my own style. its funny. i'll give him props for showing some type of cleverness. the last end he started to slack off a little to his original way. that was very clever though

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Blue Print

B.P.

uppin for votes number 1

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Blue Print

B.P.

Classic asked tha question am I a business organisation//
U damn straight I’m ‘Da’ billion-dollar ‘Classic’ corporation//
This shit is getting red hot like its DaClassic’s fuckin cremation//
II’m smoother than white chocolate, franchize is the vanilla thrilla//
My rhymes are automatic just like jumpshots from Reggie Miller//
Classic beat me first, I never knew miracles could happen//
Cuz his wack ass spit belongs in the place I take a crap in//
weak ending, nice flow, really good vocab, and make sense, straightforward good personalks and wordplay but u need metaphors... but sick verse man....and nice punches....



I couldn't recall it, Beginning of lyrical leaders fraternity?
Whose this franchize player, I'll place him on the bench for eternity
Spots are taken at my elevation center, Finding one is rare
Stupidity does not qualify as a handicap, So park elsewhere

nice ending, sick flow, really good vocab, and make sense so u simialr to the franchize but u lacked personals, wordplay and metaphors... ur punches hit very hard...but since u didnt have the devices...imo have to give it to franchize...if u had more literary devices u would have taken it easily ....reallyl good battle...sorry no hate

uppin number 2

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Blue Print

B.P.

Yo im liking this battle....
Both had some nice multis
Good Rhymes
Both Had good punches.. though i sensed some feeding fromt he last battle in Francizes rhyme.
Im feelin DaClassics ending

Im gonna hafta give it to DaClassic cause he had a sick flow... Francize fed off of the last battle..(Dunno if that counts) but Im still givin it to Classic...

Nice battle both og yall

Return the fav.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120710

OK BREAKDOWN
Opener - Daclassic...just simply a better punch...
Flow - tie...both had a hot flow...
Punches - Daclassic...he was throwin punches the whole way through while franchize waited till the second half of his verse to throw punches...
Multi's - tie...franchize had more but Daclassic's hit harder so ima give a tie...
Personals - Daclassic...had the one bout his crew which hit hard...
Closer - Daclassic...HOT SHIT...all i gotta say haha...

Vote Talleys....
franchize - 2
Daclassic - 6

Vote - Daclassic

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