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04-27-04, 07:13 PM
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IP: D5B2 8EAD
Swamp, your flow was pretty good and your rhymes were good, but this is a battle and you just weren't punchin' like quick was. His flow was better and he got in some good punches and personals that won the battle for him.
vote = quick
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04-27-04, 07:18 PM
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IP: B967 D26B
thanks man...AY KEEP THE VOTES POPPIN DONT SLEEP ON THIS.....IGHT VOTE ON THIS AND I'LL BE SURE 2 HIT UR BATTLES UP WITH AN HONEST VOTE....last time im uppin pce
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04-27-04, 07:31 PM
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I'm So Punny
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IP: 95FF 1D86
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look at dis quickpunch kid beggin for fame// he tryin to get his hustle on,he tryin to expose his name// 3/10 wtf is that but he cant cuz all his punches always comin out lame// sit back relax and watch me murda dis cat in his own game// 5/10 decent cuz im a nonstop superial, individual, physical, type of criminal,// mentally like the chemical// 3/10 not good flow...and shit kid you need a miracle to reach my level// ima keep the lyrical flow it aint gon never be settled// 4/10 wtf... quickpunch call the cops when you see me dawg// cuz dis shit wont stop til you see me fall// 1/10 that's terrible...come on now v- quickpunch...cause his first line would have more point then this |
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04-27-04, 07:33 PM
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IP: B967 D26B
ight thanks for the honest votes....keep em comin...1 more vote and ive KNOCKED THIS BITCH OUT...THATS WHY I CALL MYSELF QUICKPUNCH....HAHA gave him more than he could munch....
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04-27-04, 07:38 PM
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
Aight check it.. quick had this for sure.. so I'm gonna analyze your verse so you can elevate:
look at dis quickpunch kid beggin for fame// he tryin to get his hustle on,he tryin to expose his name// ok this is kinda played, and the rhyme is very simple, just replacing one letter. but he cant cuz all his punches always comin out lame// sit back relax and watch me murda dis cat in his own game// same deal withe the rhyme, and the punches are weak, not original at all cuz im a nonstop superial, individual, physical, type of criminal,// mentally like the chemical// mentally like chemical makes no sense. and this is a battle, stick to dissing him. kid you need a miracle to reach my level// ima keep the lyrical flow it aint gon never be settled// see you could have flipped the first line to make a punch, maybe use a nice setup line... but as it is there is no metah or anything, its just weak. quickpunch call the cops when you see me dawg// cuz dis shit wont stop til you see me fall// why would you fall? Q.P. killa and im raised like a pimp// come and see me in the swamp bout that gangsta shit you punk bitch// flow is poor, and this isn't even a punch. aight basically, work on using the concepts and flip them to make a nice, original, hard hitting punch. and put personals in there. and up your rhymes. dawg and fall dont rhyme, pimp and bitch don't rhyme. peace.
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