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danex 0 0%
discharge 5 100.00%
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Old 04-28-04, 08:58 PM   #1
shadow
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
discharge vrs. danex

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10/15 lines
no crew no d/r
no hate votes
u spit first
verses due 20 minutes after checkin in
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Old 04-28-04, 09:14 PM   #2
DaNeX
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ok ill spit first...............ayo ayo the names danex/fuck steps im knocking u out in one hit/fuck checkins........ stepin spit/u get riped subjects to predicadites/who the fuck u think u messin with/u just got infected with/leathal injection bitch/it's my recipe of recless shit/through the computer ill snatch your neckales/straight off your neck/next to your bestest friend/u need to rest your pissed/ be asleep/think a dream/ that u diddn't stink/i can't even classify u as an emimy/cus your soft your more of a friend to me/so when u go....... u can't pretend to be/ dawg you'll never get far in this indistry/
discharge/ i just shit cars/so quit bars/ and just leave/ don't come back/and don't think your little puch lines will work in your dumb rap/................get at me dawg...............holla..........
 
Old 04-28-04, 09:27 PM   #3
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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danex i dont even kno why u wanna battle me//
your shyt is weak please just look it over and see//
man you should kno that wins dont come for free//
u dont gotta chance u cant win on hopes and dreams//
your ryhmes are makin us tired they straight boring//
"WAKE UP!" quit rappin you got these people snoring//
your ryhmes are "cute", like cat in the hat there "adoring"//
with the previous lines i took away all your pride and glory//
i beat your ass thats theres no happy ending to this story//
but your gay prancin around like you peter pan//
ur 1 problem is your boysfreinds your biggest fan//
ull be reffered to punishment or repremand//
if gay was a crime youd be banned//
...and while your walkin down the street holind ur boyfreinds hand//
youll be thinkin in your head damn...discharge is the man!!//
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Old 04-28-04, 09:31 PM   #4
C.March
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Hot damn..... ok Discharge has this... but rules state no crew votes... so imma abide by them... Nuff Said... PROPS Discharge
 
Old 04-28-04, 10:45 PM   #5
DeaDly RhymeZ 01
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Discharge riped that kat i think and kno he a NOOb DISCHARGE BEST LINES:your ryhmes are makin us tired they straight boring//
"WAKE UP!" quit rappin you got these people snoring//
your ryhmes are "cute", like cat in the hat there "adoring"//

DAt Shit was ill son im fellin it lol

As for u NooB ya GOT DA WORST STRUCTURE WORK on dat and ya Rhymes n Flow ull be better well ur better than others good Try though G/L on ya NEXT ones


Discharge

Flow 8/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 9/10
Punches 8//10
Multis 6/10
OVERall//38/50

Danex
Flow 5/10
Rhymes6/10
Structure 3/10
Punches 6/10
Multis 1/10
21/50

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Old 04-29-04, 04:28 PM   #6
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no break down

discharge easly won dis danex u need structure and alot of elavavtion but it was ok but u need 2 stay on yo level 4 now ite drop but not against discharge

discharge nice drop didnt have 2 come strong but nice flow

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Old 04-29-04, 05:19 PM   #7
2Face
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the rap was cool for discharge he
had a nice flow and structure
nice rhymes goood
also i might want to have a rematch


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Old 04-29-04, 05:35 PM   #8
MCelmersglue
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Freakin' A man.
Discharge go this fool.

DaNex had no structure, it was so short, no good punches, it was a disgrace.

Discharge had the punches, flow and good, EASY TO READ, structure. Good stuff.
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Old 04-29-04, 05:41 PM   #9
unique_rhymes
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Discharge

Flow 8/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 9/10
Punches 8//10
Multis 7/10
OVERall//39/50

Danex
Flow 6/10
Rhymes6/10
Structure 3/10
Punches 6/10
Multis 3/10
25/50
 
Old 04-29-04, 05:41 PM   #10
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Quote:
Originally Posted by unique_rhymes
Discharge

Flow 8/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 9/10
Punches 8//10
Multis 7/10
OVERall//39/50

Danex
Flow 6/10
Rhymes6/10
Structure 3/10
Punches 6/10
Multis 3/10
25/50


my vote goes to discharge
 
 


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