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04-28-04, 11:40 AM | #1 | |||
GrOwN aSs MaN
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1st drop on Rapbattles...Execution Methods...holla atcha boyee
IP: 7802 99A5
-Electric Chair- It's 11:25, I'm only minutes away... "Does the inmate have words in his last minute to say"... A priest for penance my way, leather straps to arms and chest... Water drenched electrodes send my heart into cold arrest... 2,000 volts the protocol put my heart and soul to rest... With the hood drawn and good gone, regrets start to coalesce... -Lethal Injection- I requested a final meal, mashed 'tators and chicken wings... Before the anesthesia is given, intravenously... A dozen witnesses convene as Chaplain's crucifixion gleams... "Son, God can forgive you despite all these wicked things"... The toxic dose administered, K-Cl to stave my violence... A loud statement through obeisance while the room displayed silence... -Gas Chamber- My remains remain active, the gas chamber air restricted... With one flick the cyanide renders my lung-pair constricted... My eyes dangle from the pain, and if life ain't fair, what is it?... It's the horror of this stranglin', just watch how pale my skin gets... A victim at hell's gate, half an hour until I'm finished... Then, orderlies corner me once the poisoned air's diminished... -Finally, Reality- My shame's so real to me, my days surreal to me... But, I can't 'crop' a life plagued with infertility... Wasted in futility, my back up against the ring... Just wonderin' if I can get back up and commence to swing... Duckin' blunders, I got no back up to prevent a scheme... To put my back up on the mat, I rack up sense and self-esteem... And now I sit in disbelief, I'm sick of watchin' the clock... My own life is passin' by, and I'm stoppin' to watch... Like mockin' the cops, on 'beat' when I'm marchin' to heart... Or watchin' it stop, and then I get to rot in a box... uh |
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04-28-04, 12:04 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 0840 D57D
yo this shit was tite and i liked the electric chair and reality the most. i was disapointed at the first 2 lines of the lethal injection part but other than that this shit was tite.
holla back at mine I AM THE AMERICAN DREAM BLOOD, SWEAT, and TEARS
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04-28-04, 12:45 PM | #3 | |||
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IP: 7802 99A5
preciate the feedback man
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04-28-04, 04:54 PM | #4 | |||
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IP: 3240 794D
uppin dis piece
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04-28-04, 06:48 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 4289 77F4
that was a nice drop man, you got some mad skills to work with
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04-29-04, 05:24 PM | #6 | |||
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IP: 3240 794D
preciate da feedback
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04-30-04, 10:18 AM | #7 | |||
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IP: DD63 0FCA
uppin dis piece some more
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05-02-04, 08:52 AM | #8 | |||
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IP: C1DA C961
uppin this piece for feed back yo
holla 1 |
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05-02-04, 01:32 PM | #9 | |||
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IP: 91A0 7E1F
c'mon yo
can i get feed back on dis 1 |
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05-02-04, 01:33 PM | #10 | |||
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IP: 5E90 FCE6
Wow that was good 7/10 keep it up
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05-02-04, 01:41 PM | #11 | ||||||
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IP: C131 5CE9
yea this was a hott drop woulda loved to hear a beat with it and a fluent flow
nice job man........check out my open mic.......boot camp ....give me the feed....back |
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05-02-04, 01:59 PM | #12 | |||
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IP: 91A0 7E1F
aiight...thanx for feed back fellas
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05-02-04, 03:03 PM | #13 | ||||||
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
man this shit was tight
but its a bit scary wen ya put it like that
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05-02-04, 05:06 PM | #14 | ||||||
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IP: 4289 77F4
yo that shit was hot.
u got a good stuff. keep it up |
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