lets do this

hus dis darkman yellin at the screen,
watch me take takedis knife shove it thru ya spleen,
you so soft it go rite thru u like polystyrene,
im a schizo like in me, myself and irene,
when i pull da trigger,
i redecorate the walls red,
as a see the blood spread,
i dnt wana watch you lay there dead,
im too busy watchin some paint dry instead,
kidnap u and ur so-called ill flow,
make a film about it and call it finding n**ro,

5 votes win...

First things first you better know your place,as
Far as shit goes, blud,you're a disgrace,
Dis boy's steppin to me,mus be jokin
Either dat or it be da weed dat you're smokin,
Deep tokin on da magic green,
Either you be brave or you jus straight lean,oh
Pleez, you're like da AIDs of hip hop,
Evrybody's tryn a find a cure to make dat shit stop,
Young motherfucker to tryn a dubs my style,fool
Pleez i leave fools like you inna pile,
Need to bacdafuckup 'fore you get straight cut up,
Beat down,stabbed up,lefup inna gutter,you
Heard wot i said cos i know i didn't stutter,i'll
Bus yo brains across da pave like bread n butter...

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yo luminaz u mez wiv ma boy dark, i'll cum after u like a hungry shark, i can smell ur corny ass rap lines from here, don't make me chop u up and hide u under da cupboard under the stair, cos bad boy y. poizen is backin ma n***** wiv dem uzzies and berettas, my lyrics will burn you into a tortilla, you mess wiv hsz and tdt den you just wait and see cos i'm a mean ass mc who will rip u apart, stab u in the chest and take out ur heart, thats right ur feel the anger but unless u run ur skinny ass away ur in deeper danger, didnt mummy tell u not to play wiv strangerz, wanker your battlin an mc from hell, can u tell before u even started u lost the battle, u betta off herdin some cattle cos ur a farmer, u aint no charmer like us slayers we keep going till our lips hurt, u play wiv fire u gonna get burned!!!

Forget what Killa Poizen just tried to 'rap'.
More votes needed...

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hm, killa poizen craps and shit talks all over the shop, hmph. who can say 'freepost'?

ok luminaz, ya had the usual violent lines, but some lines were just plain shitty or stupid. instead of saying watching his corpse is boring so youll watch paint dry, say some shit about how ya gonna piss on his coffin at the funeral or somethin. stab at every opportunity, so he full of holes. The only things goin for ya were it rhymed, and you used some comparison. Other than that, standard, shitty played out lines that e have all read before. Make at least one personal diss, like make a diss involving his name, with it being specific to his name. Lacklustre spit.

Dark, ya stabs werent exactly strong either, and the only real thing i felt was the aids/lookin for a cure thing. however, just like lukinaz, it rhymes, flow was ok, and you didnt have as much pointless filler as lumi did. As for the hole violent shit, you both said it, its still playeds, but you had more aggression and violence in yours so you come out top there. While not good, you pretty much outdone luminaz.

my vote goes to dark

Eyo, return the favour, aight?
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122169

aight my vote goes to Darkman

1. Flowed alot better than luminaz
2. Punches were better and hit hard
3. Vocab wus better

best line - Darkman

Pleez, you're like da AIDs of hip hop,
Evrybody's tryn a find a cure to make dat shit stop

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Ayo, This is the mighty nutcracker no doubt. Its ok for people on this level to make mistakes. It is ok that we cry and make mistakes. That is part of being a human being. You have to sacrifice for the best and the best is yet to come. So to anyone that doubted me..... im jus sayin, Fuck You. (GroupHome Song Intro)

More votes needed

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This One Goes 2 Darkman...

He Got Better Flows, It Wasn't That Good But Had Enough To Bring Down Luminaz.

On Luminaz's First Post, It Started Out Fine Then Slipped Down
To Wack Rhymin And Da Same 2 Darkman But Didn't Fall Enough
He Stayed Up And Got This Battle So It Has 2 Go 2 Him.

Overall Rating:
Luminaz: 4/10
Darkaman/5/10

More votes needed

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darkman u killed him...

luminaz: your lines were too short and didn't have any good punches really
althought it did flow quite well, u were just no match for darkman.

darkman: your punches were good but couldav bin better it flowed well and all in all i have goto give it to darkman.

vote: darkman