aiight check it.....

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ill spit first

checkin in but i wont be able to drop till tomorrow prolly

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fuck lyricalmethod

i got a better flow then him he too stupid to understand when his rhymes ar wack and fake

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. Hate vote removed - strobe

man please erase this faggots vote. we ain't even drop yet.

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lyricalmethod i will get it erased dont worry im bout to drop a verse in a second

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aiight check it...........


you think my shots cant hurt you? shyt i just shot and murked you//
and im droppin more fat shyt than what your mom gave birth to//
your the worst..your never near your dream of coming first//
its plain to see im gonna be up on your neck like polo shirts//
u runnin the streetz? bytch please..only with me chasin you poppin the 5th//
somebody must'a "chopped off ya lips" cuz your "mouthin off" talkin that shyt//
you need to know the truth..i know your scared and i bet your nervous//
you discovered my disses will cover you like your epidermis//
i'll tell you how good you are till u have lots of confidence//
then send punches on the net to hit u across the continent//
either lyrical is a femcee or the only emcee with no nuts//
even if i "disembowed" you in a battle you still couldnt "show guts"//
comin at me with rhymes that are so-so is a no-no//
shoulda acted like a closed theatre and been a "no show"//
light you up like halogens..ILL disses...u missed all of them//
you could probably spit better if u just quit swallowin//

~!1!~

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Shit You Lost To Enygma? & Streetsweepa? & Sixfifty? ..!! Damn.. lol Now I Feel Like' .. I Got MERKED' .. Big Time!! lol

*Sorry For FreePosting*

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i lost to sixfifty aka nolost4rhymes...cause i didnt battle good...streetsweepa was my first battle and well enygma is enygma he ill...but ya u did get merked

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nice verse imma drop in a few.......................

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When if flow i cause more contreversey than Kobe's rape cases and anger more people than eminems rascist statements/Lets face it im on top you stuck in tigger's basement.My skill it timeless b it ain't no replacin me/I don't want to sound rascist but you can't be black cuz you have Micheal Jackson's skin traces/YOu think you "I'll" but you couldn't be sick even if you had anthrax for a year, yeah and i don't respect ya im like your mom i always neglect ya/You got good punch lines but you couldn't blow up even if you could swallow proximiny mines/My rhymes blind ya got yah thinkin im right behind yah, but its not me you better get the "Picture" and adjust your reception/My nuts bigger than yours ask your girl i slid up in her like THE TROJAN OF TROY, its simple my verbs make imprints in your mind like dimples/You don't have guns you couldn't hold a gat even if Nick Cannon was your newborn son/ Im so contreversial i put more graphics in yah then feed the children television specials/ yes sir im nice, too cool me off its gonna take a lifesize can of Old Spice/Face it R.B. is not your place man you belong on planet wackness where there is no escape man, you got heart but evrybody know you soft and sweet like warmed up pop tarts. im on point like darts and stay hittin the mark cuz i mastered this art. and naw i don't feel yah, like talkin under water bitch i can't hear yah. And a no-sho that won't happen thats impossible Like Fred Hammon rappin. you might have braces you still can't spit bars my lyrics sneek up on you like unmarked cops cars. i drop jaws, save your oooo's and ah's i drop hard like shit like i got Zeus's balls.

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

uppin for votes drop a link and ill return the favor

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you think my shots cant hurt you? shyt i just shot and murked you//
and im droppin more fat shyt than what your mom gave birth to//
LOl good stuff.....
your the worst..your never near your dream of coming first//
its plain to see im gonna be up on your neck like polo shirts//
LOl funny again....
u runnin the streetz? bytch please..only with me chasin you poppin the 5th//
somebody must'a "chopped off ya lips" cuz your "mouthin off" talkin that shyt//not that good but aight..
you need to know the truth..i know your scared and i bet your nervous//
you discovered my disses will cover you like your epidermis//
Aight..pretty good
i'll tell you how good you are till u have lots of confidence//
then send punches on the net to hit u across the continent//
Cool pretty aight.....
either lyrical is a femcee or the only emcee with no nuts//
even if i "disembowed" you in a battle you still couldnt "show guts"//
Nah that aight....need a lil more work
comin at me with rhymes that are so-so is a no-no//
shoulda acted like a closed theatre and been a "no show"//
aight.....
light you up like halogens..ILL disses...u missed all of them//
you could probably spit better if u just quit swallowin//
lol good closiner,,,,,,

When if flow i cause more contreversey than Kobe's rape cases and anger more people than eminems rascist statements/Lets face it im on top you stuck in tigger's basement.My skill it timeless b it ain't no replacin me/I don't want to sound rascist but you can't be black cuz you have Micheal Jackson's skin traces/YOu think you "I'll" but you couldn't be sick even if you had anthrax for a year, yeah and i don't respect ya im like your mom i always neglect ya/You got good punch lines but you couldn't blow up even if you could swallow proximiny mines/My rhymes blind ya got yah thinkin im right behind yah, but its not me you better get the "Picture" and adjust your reception/My nuts bigger than yours ask your girl i slid up in her like THE TROJAN OF TROY, its simple my verbs make imprints in your mind like dimples/You don't have guns you couldn't hold a gat even if Nick Cannon was your newborn son/ Im so contreversial i put more graphics in yah then feed the children television specials/ yes sir im nice, too cool me off its gonna take a lifesize can of Old Spice/Face it R.B. is not your place man you belong on planet wackness where there is no escape man, you got heart but evrybody know you soft and sweet like warmed up pop tarts. im on point like darts and stay hittin the mark cuz i mastered this art. and naw i don't feel yah, like talkin under water bitch i can't hear yah. And a no-sho that won't happen thats impossible Like Fred Hammon rappin. you might have braces you still can't spit bars my lyrics sneek up on you like unmarked cops cars. i drop jaws, save your oooo's and ah's i drop hard like shit like i got Zeus's balls

Ok I cant undersyabd what your sayin b/c you have no structure....Work on some stuuf...Punches was aight but work on others....I cant rate your verses b/c no stucture
v/Flows

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122401
^^^vote

Lrycial Method,reading ur verse was like reading an essay.Terrible structure,not easy to read at all.If you were trying to hide the stretched lines,it didn't work.Look at that last line.That is loooooooong.Complexity&creativity also goes to Flow.Punches were good by both of you.But I gotta give this to Flow.Lyrical,you had some played out shit,like that shit in ur opener about Kobe.But the fact u made ur verse like a paragraph,made me hate it.

Vote-Flow(drop a vote in my battle)

you think my shots cant hurt you? shyt i just shot and murked you//
and im droppin more fat shyt than what your mom gave birth to//

^^ OUCH! ...lol

u runnin the streetz? bytch please..only with me chasin you poppin the 5th//
somebody must'a "chopped off ya lips" cuz your "mouthin off" talkin that shyt//

^^ good wordplay and punch

light you up like halogens..ILL disses...u missed all of them//
you could probably spit better if u just quit swallowin//

^^ nice hard closer...but kinda played wit the swallowin ref.

When if flow i cause more contreversey than Kobe's rape cases and anger more people than eminems rascist statements/Lets face it im on top you stuck in tigger's basement

^^^ I don't get it...where's the end rhyme for "peoples"...that kinda sets up the punch


ugh
if Nick Cannon was your newborn son/ Im so contreversial i put more graphics in yah then feed the children television specials/ yes sir im nice, too cool me off its gonna take a lifesize can of Old Spice/
^^^^& I can't follow ur flow son...and that's not my fault

srry...

Vote: FLow...better flow/structure/rhyming/wordplay


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Yo I Cant Read Yo Lyrics// Lyrical Method// Dog I Was Readin It Den// I Got Bored As Fuck//zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz// Nice Punches And Flowz// But Yo Fuckin Struture Is Killing Me B//

Flow Intelligent Nice Punches// Word Play// Flowz// And Vocab//

Vote= Flow

Lyrical Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!

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