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checkin in... you gonna get fuked again dizawg...

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Checkin in lets spit dawg n this time im gonna whip yo' ass son

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so its me against Hydroponic buzz for the seacond round/
sept this time im gonna knock him out with ma lyrical sound/
this bitch thinks he got a good buzz goin on/
but he'll be sleepin with the fishes when im done/
and thats gonna be the end of yo' hustlin career/
im the Dogg dats bringin the fear, cryin when im near/
thinkin you got this shit on lockdown/
but remember i aint gonna back down/
im comin at you with ak's drawn/
everytime i get hit i just respawn/
get so high on the BUZZ of it all/
your ass ill be bouncin off the wall/
while you chillin listenin to the sterophonics/
ill be huntin down this bitch hydroponic/
is this another body for the pound/
another dip shit that wont be found/
well see when the show is over when your down and out/
this faggot should have gave his full crew a shout/
coz with out a doubt i just knocked this mother fucker out/

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you wanna step-to-this, an holla' for a rematch/
ya' see me prep-ma-swiss, army knife at ya' snatch/
an' what's with you're crew, it don't even exist/
Dark Knights are about to feel ma' heathen fist/
y'all should combine to make, "spiky iman the fatal teen dogg"/
maybe joined together a half decent rapper may be formed/
i checked out ya' hotmail, it says that yo' funky/
then why you a honky, hangin' wit the flunkies?/
so ya' occupation's a PIMP, damn that's funny/
you a muh' fuckin' gimp, yo mumma made ya any money?/
ya' rhyme's are as bare as ya' lack of pubic hair/
ya' shit don't even rhyme dawg, ya' visually impaired??/

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i'll be straight up honest with both of you.i dont judge on multis,flows,structure or bullshit like that.i judge on basically if you're good at what you do or if you're bad.and frankly,that was bad.i gotta give this to hydro for the reason that there were less americanisms in his verse which id expect from people in america,but not people from scotland for crying out loud.also hydro actually had pisstalking punches and jay,your verse read out like a straight gangsta rap with no real punches at all.dissapointing......

This Battle Goes To Hydro Cauze He Got Better Lyricism
Dogg Waz Good Though But Didn't But Enough
Overall Rating:
Hydro: 7/10
Dogg: 4/10

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this was a close battle...close because neither emcee came aggressively wit the punches...

but...Jays verse was better simple because it was more complex...


Hydro came with shit that wasn't even a half-hearted attempt at being complex

and, for that, JAy gets the nod.



Vote: Jay

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jay your verse was nice and so was buzz's. jay your punches were better anf buzz i 've seen better from you. step up dawg.nice punchez and punchez jay.

vote=Jay_Dogg

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

Jay Dogg - Good multi's and personals man, I was feeling your shit.. you had some good punches in there.

Best Line - while you chillin listenin to the sterophonics/
ill be huntin down this bitch hydroponic/

Worst Line - im comin at you with ak's drawn/
everytime i get hit i just respawn/ (thats nice, aint a punch tho)

Buzz - Alright spit man, you had a good flow going on and your punches were alright.

Best Line - an' what's with you're crew, it don't even exist/
Dark Knights are about to feel ma' heathen fist/

Worst Line - you wanna step-to-this, an holla' for a rematch/
ya' see me prep-ma-swiss, army knife at ya' snatch/

OVERALL - Alright battle here, I will give the vote to Jay for his multi's and personals. Buzz man you didnt have any multi's and your shit lacked punches.. there wernt to good at all, worst batle i seen you do man.. step it up next time.

VOTE - Jay Dogg

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uppin....

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Welll i honestly Cant give opinions On Punch Lines Atructures and all dat shit, Cause everyone has a Diffrent FLow.. In this case out of the Two. Buzz You had a goood flow going on but Jay Had a little Advantage on you

V/ Jay