Read it properly b4 u vote beezy okay.............

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To Be Honest...I Don't Know Why I Bothered

This Is My Straight Up Ratings:
Opener: Mad Dog
Blows: Bigneks (it Waz Wack Though)
Flows: 50/50 And They Weren't Good
Structure: Bigneks (try Harder Nex Time)
Rhymes: Mad Dog (bignek Could Hardly Be Understanded)
Overall:
Bignek: 4/10
Mad Dog: 5/10

This Battle Goes 2...mad Dog

Can I vote on this without being branded a hater????? Who knows, who cares, I'ma do what I'ma do.

Relatively decent battle

BigNeks
Now, just cos ur my boy, I ain't gonna go easy on you (remember the "Will Smith" line I dropped on u in Diss the Rapper above??? LOL All in da name of cypha, tho!)

Opener was fair, not great or inspiring, but fair.
The "come BITE my stuff, it's the only way you'll be sick/
u get your ass out like your MUM, and take 50 Dicks//" line worked, simple & affective.
Decent again thru the middle, not mind blowing, but decent.
Picked yourself up a bit with the:
"lyrically damage ya, with this shit that spawns like illborns/
metaphorically snipe ya, and leave your corpse all sore and malformed/" that was aight.
Now I can sort of understand the fallout from the 9/11 lines. We Brits, so we don't appreciate 'fully' how that affected folks. I've been to NYC for work - I was there a short while after that fateful day (we used to have an office 3 blocks away from Ground Zero). NYC was amazingly united in the aftermath of that tragedy - it was something to behold, and it will always be a sore subject. Not your fault, Bigs, but you'll know (we'll ALL know, I'm talking UK MCs) in the future to steer clear of the topic.
Fortunately, you finished with a good line:
" throw this finishin blow to the back of your skull/
2k wants to stick his Dick in, but your ass is too FULL" - 2 in 1 hit
Not your best spit, but adequate

Maddog
"Long line, short line" opener - you know I don't go for that...
"Short line, long line" follow up - has the penny dropped yet?
" see that Big neck strain when u try to spit verbs/
But i cant understand ur words" - see, this was almost a good line, a standout line, I mean, but you needed to fill out the second line, bludz!
Kinda below-par thru till the last bar:
"All my rhymes rhyme...now who lacks the lyrical weed?/ (weed = imagination)
Wanna ask ur bitch bout that baby...coz im sure he aint ur seed/" - I liked this........ but since when has weed meant imagination?????
I've seen you spit alot better than this - you didn't do yourself justice here.

My (hate-free) vote?

Goes to the Nek.

PS I don't want any of you bitin' that "Kinda below-par thru till the last bar" line I dropped in my critique...... (that was a joke, just in case y'all get it twisted!!!)

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I can't vote on this?


That's understandable I guess.

Good Luck to da both of y'all.

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This goes out to mr bitch up in bollington UK
SPIT more shit about new york ill kill you ok

disrespectful trick your lines simply aint no treat
in the U.S. you be considered fresh fish on the street

So recall our pain and struggle thru those trife times
If not, ill be layin dick in your ass bigger than pipelines

im not voting on this shit man but you need to fuckin check yourself with that 9/11 shit man that shows how much u lack skill aint nothin about that rap that made me say "that shit was hott" step up attack people not dead ones man..............

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hmm ok,lets see,

BIG NEK: your verse was real tight and well structures,complex wordplay,good punches and flow.i was feelin your verse with lines such as:lyrically damage ya, with this shit that spawns like illborns/
metaphorically snipe ya, and leave your corpse all sore and malformed/
very good line right here^^ but there were some i wasnt feeling too too much:when your writin your shit, u use a crayola/
u jus a kid, and im tellin you that its over/
u think your Jay-Z, frontin like you that HOVA/
this line was pretty elementary.
overall:7/10.real good

MAD DOG:i wasnt feeling your verse very much,rough flow,wordplay quite simple,um,structure good tho,um not too too
solid overall.examples of rough flow and simple wordplay are such as this:Now i told u in the beginnin that i'd be winnin/
But i guess u werent listenin/
and this All my rhymes rhyme...now who lacks the lyrical weed?/ (weed = imagination)
Wanna ask ur bitch bout that baby...coz im sure he aint ur seed
but whatever not that horrible of a verse:
overall:5/10.average.work on your wordplay and your flow

FINAL VOTE: BIG NEK

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