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CounTREE Jay 0 0%
L.I. 5 100.00%
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Old 05-06-04, 03:44 PM   #1
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CounTREE Jay vs L.I.

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Aight....

RULES
10 Lines
No d/r
No hate votes
No crew votes
No biting
No feeding
Check in before you spit
Verses due Friday cause I'm busy this week

Goodluck

Peace....
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Old 05-06-04, 04:18 PM   #2
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I'm checked.......................................
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Old 05-07-04, 08:08 AM   #3
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Check Check. Will drop at sometime today, A lil' busy
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Old 05-07-04, 11:07 AM   #4
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Finally got your name, it stands for Lyrically Incapable,/
Don't try to hide now, your merkin' is unescapable./
Could be claimin' the Island, that's the only shit long,/
Your verse, everything you write, that's the only shit wrong./
Fam you fourteen, you even made it to high school,/
And you claimin' murder? Believe you as much as Ja Rule./
Maybe if I try, same your name as a whole it's Li(lie),/
M.C., your flows niggaz can't see, like the got a sty,/
I really command this mic, niggaz like you shouldn't try this,/
You couldn't key somethin' sic if your computer had a virus./
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Old 05-07-04, 03:56 PM   #5
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My Verse

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Aight...

Your not known here, could post all day, noone would notice u spoke...
And how you gonna go round reppin a crew everyone takes as a joke...
People realize ya shit is wack...watch his loss category climb...
First your steal enygma's idea's...what's next his rhymes?...
How can you expect to be respected and all the shit like that...
When your havin problems keeping your own crew intact...
Told him to spit only 10 lines, and this bitch already fatigued...
Your fuckin wack, that's why no one will rep ur crew in the league...
Got the proof he bit...i got the link for yall to witness the fall of counTREE...
Here it is, third bar, same exact shit my boy kuniva spit against me...
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Old 05-07-04, 04:21 PM   #6
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whoa good battle y'all...Breakdown
Country
Punches: 5/10
Personals: 5/10
Wordplay: 4/10
Creativity: 6/10
Overall: 20/40

Breakdown: L.I.
Punches: 5/10
Personals: 8/10
Wordplay: 5/10
Creativity: 6/10
Overall: 24/40
L.I. you took this battle wit your visious personals, punches coulda been better
Vote: L.I.
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Old 05-07-04, 04:51 PM   #7
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Aight... I don't think CJ bit that line because I had actually thought of using that... it's just kinda obvious... but anyway I think LI wins because he had more personals. CJ, you seemed kinda lacking the wordplay and hard punches you usually had... not your best battle I've seen. LI, you got less stretched bars and that's good.. but you gotta work on getting harder punches in there.. the links are ok but it isn't as great really as a nice punch.
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Old 05-07-04, 04:55 PM   #8
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Country Jay-ur punches were good..but werent directly personal...u dissed L.I. but make it personal..like show us something true about L.I. ur flow and structure was good...i mean overall u killed it but only if u were battling some1 who didnt have personals...

L.I.-i vote for u. one reason is cause of the personals..i mean u came str8 at him and didnt stop..ur flow flowed the best and structure was nicely set..i like how u provided information so we can make sure everything u said bout him was true..which did end up being true...

overall this battle was good...a lil weird for me but was good...L.I. takes it for personals...
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Old 05-07-04, 05:18 PM   #9
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thanks for the feedback and votes.......uppin..........
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Old 05-07-04, 06:28 PM   #10
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nice drops both came wit some ill mattic shit

Li-nice punches and keepin yo verse conistant on yo flow

bestline-Your not known here, could post all day, noone would notice u spoke...
And how you gonna go round reppin a crew everyone takes as a joke

nice start

worsteline-none

nice drop overall yo verse gets a 9/10

countreejay-nice personals on yo flow

bestline-Fam you fourteen, you even made it to high school,/
And you claimin' murder? Believe you as much as Ja Rule./

nice

worsetline-Finally got your name, it stands for Lyrically Incapable,/
Don't try to hide now, your merkin' is unescapable./

nice vocab but not 2 good of a start

overall yo verse gets a 8/10 on slack start

winner-LI
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Old 05-07-04, 08:29 PM   #11
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this was a hott battle big props to both of you

CJ-nice flow dogg-liked the vocab you used, you had some nice punches in there
and some nice personals-didnt see too many multis though

I really command this mic, niggaz like you shouldn't try this,/
You couldn't key somethin' sic if your computer had a virus./
nice closer dogg^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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LI- your shit was nice- I was feelin your flow and you droped some hott personals and your punches hit hard- you used some nice vocab too- had a hott closer and a nice closer
nice line here
Your not known here, could post all day, noone would notice u spoke...
And how you gonna go round reppin a crew everyone takes as a joke...


vote LI

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121724

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