ima keep my title, u can call out names...u could rap in an out-house and still not 'stall' the game//
ur rhymes lackin flavor like empty gum packs so now u ejacu|ate backwards just to 'cum back'//
this kids a soft ass like bum wax, like athletes in 'special olympics' u runnin 'dumb tracks'//
wen i bust my 9 i might spray so go ahead and 'zig zag'...u gettin smoked like 'white j's'//*
i left ya the right way cuz this light weight tried to 'swing straight' but only fights gay//
u wanna talk nouns i dock sounds...u could fill cavities with cement and still not 'rock' crowns//
throw out the keys...this battles on the lock down, u've always been gay...u just suckin çock now//
ya profile full of 'property' extortion cuz ur a 'fucken mistake' like female abortions//*
this quëèr offered me distortion by sayin his mouth goes around çock like male forskin//
ur ass wouldn't be sharp if u shit spikes...like stuffed animals u kno im gonna rip white!// ooooo
this recycler likes to flip bikes so i'll leave j white seein more 'blood' than crypt fights//*
my forces scorches ya fortress with 4 hits cuz i 'beat up' pussies and leave em with sore clits//
fuck this jackass...of course he likes horses...u never came with game so u may as well forfeit//
u couldn't make 'dough' tyrin to shred wheat, 'screw' this, ur post made the 'thread' weak!//
im steppin hard like lead feet, i'll leave a cd player in ya coffin cuz u just a 'dead beat'//
u lackin game 'on the ball' or not so i'll put a bullet in ya mouth and let u 'call the shots'//
cmon dawg...copy and paste is all u got, u goin down in flames but still ain't fallin hot//
all ya melodies gettin smoked like remedies so u musta been high wen that PM was sent to me//
u only 1 step ahead of me alphabetically so fuck this CRIPpled bitch and his BLOODline pedigree//**

MC Murder - nice wordplay and flow. You were like Tyson with those punches. Maaaann!

The Godfather - MC was punching too hard, and all you did was jab. I liked how you tried to wordplay, but some of your bars were wack i.e.) "I be as wild as a tornado and I'm better so far...so put on a bulletproof vest nigga, I strick hard" What does a tornado and a bullet have in common? Absolutely nothing. That's how your verses were against MC...out of place. You were outclassed son, but you can flow. Elevate next time, and come with it. Don't hesitate to give it all you got. MC Murder did exactly what his name suggests...he killed another emcee...

i gotts say here mc had the hardest punches and his flow was better to.Godfather your verse was good but the punches just wernt hittin as hard as Mc's were. Good battle though.

my vote MC Murder

hit up some of ma battles guys peace

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this was a great ass battle

both flows were hott

murder should've had his words eazy 2 read cauze they look all put together

godfather was good as hell

i liked his flow, blows, opener, and closer

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opener-godfATher
flow-godfather
blow-godfather
struture-godfather
closer-godfather

good battle

u did good murder, just that godafther waz better

not bad fa a newbie battle... best lines i saw was mc murder's:
u wanna talk nouns i dock sounds...u could fill cavities with cement and still not 'rock' crowns//
throw out the keys...this battles on the lock down, u've always been gay...u just suckin çock now//

ya threw punches godfather but missed ya target... stay focused and i'm still waitin' fa u ta drop at our battle don't no show it... keep up y'all work and work on ya structure k...
my vote: mc murder

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encore, great battle both of you's

murder was good and also did godfather so here is my votes

opener:godfather
flow:godfather
blow:godfather
struture:murder
closer:godfather

good battle

uppin 4 more votes here, don

favor will be return

mc murda gotta ill name but ya lines are too dam long n flow like shit(no offense) shorten them shits! the godfather wins this1!

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Tha Ghost! Far Rockaway,Queens n all far rock projex Repazent!

To the NYPD: You cant catch watchu cant see!! BITCHES!! HA HA outran u befo, n will do it again!!

parts a ma street free...maaaad threats n murda talk...

"watchu think goes bump in the night,
im either fuckin ya bitch or takin ya life..."

"i hate suckas that always be lyin,
get out tha game fo i stab u witta soderin iron"

take any a my lines ima fuck u up!!!!