Ight
10-16 bars no mroe no less
15 mins to spit
blind spit
no feedin
no bitin
no d/r
no crew votes
no hate votes

checkin

Check in..

ayo check it....check i.....listin...

I’m calling Merk peter pan, cuz his punches Never Never land…/
This battle's goin down like black hawks on Iraqi land…/
Merk iM a throw a right, goodnite, hold ya rap dreams tight…/
Twista and Kanye couldnt make this bitch a celeb overnight!!…/
Bout to get your ass fucked <--did that make you kinda horny?…/
I'd pull ya card...but the faggot wrote his number on it for me…/
Merk ya rhyme's a joke, so was ya life from cradle to grave …/
I thought I mastered every trick - till I made u my slave…/
^ I just beat u wit u own wack style, soft-hitting punch, see…/
Only personal's Merk ever dropped are in gay dudes monthly…/
I bet someone thinks ima loose this, but of course i'm flippin the spots…/
Honestly Merk the only way u could blow Heat is when ya foods hot…/
Aint contendin wit this, ur no veteran kid, quit pretendin that shit…/
I aint sure if Africa spreads aids or a myth…cuz Merk aint sick!…/

holla atcah boy!!!!

Ight.. heres the blind spit
Ayo, watch as I slit his neck to get to the core and rip his apple/
Ur crews all pigs And u just Represent "The Scrapple"/
Dick Ridin and Braggin this dude think he really be "rappin"/
But even if I imagined him "Wit Flow" it still wouldn't happen/
U aint a dope "killah", sit down, shut up and watch me chin check ya/
cuz I abuse Grammar.. more then kids with Dsylexia.. (a disease)
I'll place u in a river and u still wouldnt be able to "flow"/
You could write "mad skillz" down on paper and it still wouldnt show/
No talent dickridin to get in "LD", never seemed ta choke/ (lyrical destruction)
Lodge my cock in your mouth, now ur finally storing dope/
Damn ur shit, ill mass murder ya crew with a sickened cough/
Like olympic swimmers, I shook this kid so bad his body hair's fell off/
I merked u, go elevate cuz i feel bad i broke ur essense/
I sat this kid on Santa and he still couldnt demand "presents"/

Im feelin ya rap killah.. i just wonder why ur style changes alot.. u go from no multis to multis and back to no multies.. haha its all good

cuz sometimes i think of multis and then i have no multis i dont know but nice drop merk! hit up the votes hot battle

Ya u too.. vet battle homie.. no doubt no doubt.. hit this shit up wit some HONEST votes people.. cant sleep on a hot battle like this

I’m calling Merk peter pan, cuz his punches Never Never land…/
This battle's goin down like black hawks on Iraqi land…/

^^ first line nice...second..blah..almost filler

I bet someone thinks ima loose this, but of course i'm flippin the spots…/
Honestly Merk the only way u could blow Heat is when ya foods hot…/
Aint contendin wit this, ur no veteran kid, quit pretendin that shit…/
I aint sure if Africa spreads aids or a myth…cuz Merk aint sick!…/

punches landed...but cud be harder...i think AIDS lines are played unless you come completely original


Ight.. heres the blind spit
Ayo, watch as I slit his neck to get to the core and rip his apple/
Ur crews all pigs And u just Represent "The Scrapple"/

not feelin the punch..and personally, i dun get it

Ight.. heres the blind spit
Ayo, watch as I slit his neck to get to the core and rip his apple/
Ur crews all pigs And u just Represent "The Scrapple"/

^^ da pretty coo

I merked u, go elevate cuz i feel bad i broke ur essense/
I sat this kid on Santa and he still couldnt demand "presents"/
^^ comman presence?..um...coulda been better


Vote: Lyrical Killak..his punches were more coherent...but u could up your wordplay 4 real


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flow-both had good easy to read linez-easy to follow 8/10 for both there
structure-again nowt init-both verses were set up nice 8/10 for both
punches-i think merks were funny,but killah`s hit harder n thats wot counts
merk-7/10
killah 8/10
personals-
i think merk had the 1,cudnt see any from killah
so ima give killah 5/10
n merk 6/10
multis- for me the battle went down to multis n word play which
killa came out on top
killah 8/10
merk 6/10

my vote lyrical KILLAH

only thing i can say is both up yer personals n cum wit harder punche
n merk inc. get sum multis goin on

ok hit this battle up with some more honest votes!

Both had a pretty good flow and punches... though Lyrical killer probably edged out merked in the latter category. Wordplay goes to merk but because he had more even though I wasn't really feeling all of it.

I liked:
"Merk iM a throw a right, goodnite, hold ya rap dreams tight…/
Twista and Kanye couldnt make this bitch a celeb overnight!!…/
Bout to get your ass fucked <--did that make you kinda horny?…/
I'd pull ya card...but the faggot wrote his number on it for me…/"

Killa had some good, humorous punches which, in the end, gets him my vote. Good battle.



http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123621

dis was a okay battle kind of wun sided 2 me tho

opener-merk...killah ya first line was good then da second just fukked it up
structure-umm a tie
punchlines-merk hands down..killah aint have nun
creativity-merk
multis-nun
wordplay-merk had a little
personals-merk
enjoyed-merk....killah u got merked dunn lol i just dont like da way ay words ryhme u dont double ryhme so datz week 2 me plus ya punches was corny no hate just givin my opinion...merk nice verse some of ya shit was corny 2 but u got dis

my vote-merk

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1282552
^^^^link 2 my battle rite there return da favor ya'll..GON

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That shit had me rollin, both yall got some skillz, Nice punches... KILLAH went a little more with the comedic shit and Merk went with the hit ya frame punches... both are tight, just depends what your feelin more at that time...

coulda went either way.

V= Lyrical KILLAH

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