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05-11-04, 02:24 PM | #1 | |||||||
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IP: 85B8 5CBF
I gotta knack
for holding visitors rapt until their feet go floppy as flippers i'm the shark of the sac i'm like jaws with a gat i capture victims in battle once they fall in my trap i'm like a home run hard hitter with my ballz and my bat I whistle at females cause basically i'm just calling at cats who wants to battle cause i need some wins in my stats.
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I've been cursed with this curse/to just blurt this bizzare shit/and it works/to help relieve the tension thats been eating me off my chest recently/and now i can rest again peacefully... -Eminem P.S. Fuck all ya'll bitches lilkasper5@yahoo.com http://hiphopdirectory.com www.thugzprophesy.com I'M DA REMIX OF TUPAC & THE SEQUAL TO LUDWIG van BEETHOVEN
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05-11-04, 02:27 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 3700 1584
yo dawg, any rhyme where you say gat isnt gonna cut it....elevate. Think of better words
Pz O
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<MARQUEE>In the end there can be only 1ne.</MARQUEE> Omen of ELMNTz
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05-11-04, 02:30 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 0136 10AF
o thts cold plya u gots let him no how to elevate not jus say elvatw
u cud fink of better words make it longer homeboi pimpizle
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05-12-04, 02:08 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 7A52 73B1
that was pretty tight.
ya need to increase yo wordplay. try by rhymin words that arent spelled da same. for example gat and cat are to easy to rhyme wit try sayin stuff like this these rappaz will end up wit a shell on their back/ they'll have sexual intercourses wit my gat/ it just takes for you to talk shit just to get slapped/ use complex rhyme play and mix it wit excellent vocab. peace |
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