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Old 05-11-04, 02:24 PM   #1
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I gotta knack
for holding visitors rapt
until their feet go floppy as flippers
i'm the shark of the sac
i'm like jaws with a gat
i capture victims in battle once they fall in my trap
i'm like a home run hard hitter with my ballz and my bat
I whistle at females cause basically i'm just calling at cats
who wants to battle cause i need some wins in my stats.
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Old 05-11-04, 02:27 PM   #2
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yo dawg, any rhyme where you say gat isnt gonna cut it....elevate. Think of better words

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Old 05-11-04, 02:30 PM   #3
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o thts cold plya u gots let him no how to elevate not jus say elvatw
u cud fink of better words make it longer homeboi pimpizle
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Old 05-12-04, 02:08 PM   #4
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that was pretty tight.

ya need to increase yo wordplay.

try by rhymin words that arent spelled da same.
for example gat and cat are to easy to rhyme wit

try sayin stuff like this
these rappaz will end up wit a shell on their back/
they'll have sexual intercourses wit my gat/
it just takes for you to talk shit just to get slapped/



use complex rhyme play and mix it wit excellent vocab.



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