aight rules:

spit due 20 min. after check in
same house rules
3-0 is ko
i got ta spit first..u must suck then...haha
10 lines max

checkin in

Good luck homie..........checkin in...............

shyt..my bad dawg..my comp froze and broke for a while..so here's my spit

I'm guaranteed a win, so this battles a waste of time-
Can match ya verse with 'no spit', so this just a waste of lines-
This kids 'cheesy' how he got smashed between 'crackers' in the pit-
Hard to understand? Well he took a chance, but couldn't handle any shyt//
Our records could match, but understand that your not on my level-
Ur 'dirt'!, so don't act surprised when u get hit with the 'shovel'-
U'll throw CY's as I shake off the RUSS with this quick freestyle-*
I just doubled 'U', so i guess you wish you was 'me' now-
Take a break, no 1 wants to see ya senceless multi's, all sound the same-
And It's a shame that your 'sharpest' asset is in your title name-*
I'll take ya 'heat' like late gas bills, so tell me "who's 'gunnin' now?"-
Spit hot shit through ya motem, now u read "Windows is Shutting Down"-

*CY's (sigh's), RUSS (rust)
*title says [Rap Fan] (got it)

i only spit 6 lines dawg..now let me see urs

Better rhyme less because with more time and rhymes you spit you digress
He must be “going down escalators” the way he’s reversing the elevating process
Best chance you got is dying cuz that’s the only way I’ma be R.I.P. (Ripped)
His good rhymes would never “stick” if his rhymes embodied his avy
On this site his rhymes are red lights, each rhyme packed in a hearse
He‘s trying to make his rhymes more than “just ice“(justice) but he’s getting less “per verse” (perverse)*
Indestructible but like Achilles, one weakness, his mouth is where I aim
He couldn’t “mesmerize” us with his rhymes if he could “spell” his own name**
On him I’ll leave a “scar “ “face” so hell at least be “shooting” for the stars
How he gonna win when he doesn’t know the difference between a line and a bar***
His rhymes would never leave a trail of fire if he was dancing with the devil
If Rhyming was like the ocean then this bitch’s rhymes is below sea level


*red lights stop traffic, perverse= sum1 who turns away frum justice
**spelled his own name wrong in his sig
**he said 6 lines wen it wuz 6 bars

aiight there's my verse undestrucable.....Uppin for votes......

I gots to go wit renegade cuz his punches was way more personal. It was a hard decision cuz both yall niggaz came wit sum shit. I was feelin this battle. 1 of da best I seen in a minute.

Aight Undestructable or is it suppost to be undestrucable:
Your verse was hot pimpin everything was on you just didn't get personal enuff for me that verse coulda been directed towards anybody. And that was 6 bars not 6 lines but it's peace.
Hottest line:
"I just doubled you so I guess you wish you was me now"
Hottest line:
"Our records could match but understand you're not on my level
your dirt so don't act surprised when you get hit wit da shovel"

Renegade:
Your shit was potent my nigga. Tha personals were off da chain. You could tell this was for indestructable and nobody else.
Hottest line:
"How he gonna win when he don't know da difference between a line and a bar"
Worst line:
"Best chance you got is dyin cuz that's tha only way i'll be R.I.Pped"
(how he would RIP if he died)

Yo hot flow thru and thru both of yall but...
vote=renegade
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124378

__________________
Judge not,
Less you be judged first
-DMX-

a yo fellaz swing thru and peep this battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124378
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__________________
Judge not,
Less you be judged first
-DMX-

Best chance you got is dyin cuz that's tha only way i'll be R.I.Pped"
(how he would RIP if he died)

exactly he wouldn't, and thas his best chance...lol......yo appreciate the vote mayn ima go vote on your battle ryte now.....

this is renegade wit a new username..........Uppin for votes..................

Uppin for votes everyone............................

Uppin for votes someone vote......................