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delinquent_zero 2 28.57%
fatk4p 5 71.43%
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Old 05-17-04, 02:52 PM   #1
fatk4p
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From: jerz
delinquent_zero vs. fatk4p

IP: 6D32 EBF0

10 lines
no crew or hate votes
delinquent_zero...spit first
 
Old 05-17-04, 02:54 PM   #2
delinquent_zero
Flyweight
 
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From: london
IP: 65E8 9804

im ready 2 kick it now,ok put da guns down
fink ur king, im here 2 take ur crown
so u sure ur ready to battle a real emcee
my flow is hot, even doe im a newbie
dnt try rap, if ur sum form of sissy
feed u lyrics, make u fatter den missy
ok now its time 2 pik da guns up
brace urself , hope ur ready 2 get gun bucked
spittin lyrics wid my own style and flow
tear u up, like my name was rambo


1st ever spit on dis site, kinda crap but dnt watch dat
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Old 05-17-04, 03:25 PM   #3
fatk4p
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From: jerz
IP: 6D32 EBF0

rackin up enough credits on my record to retire//
looks like im smokin cause my words are on fire//
you like a clock cause you like to tick my shots//
this dickryders like a glock cause he likes the cock//
my rymes screwed you over like my lines were a drill//
i thrilled you and brewed you up a punch that you spilled//
you like a bad book that i like to put down//
turn around only to give me a smut frown//
since you the delinquenti can see your the one to blame//
you declare your self a newbie cause your flow is the same//
 
Old 05-17-04, 03:34 PM   #4
Mc DiP
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IP: 828D 0B7A

both pretty bad but ill go with fat because i think hes ryhmed better not bad
 
Old 05-17-04, 06:17 PM   #5
delinquent_zero
Flyweight
 
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From: london
IP: 9AE7 AA5A

come on ppl need alot more votes to this. its onli 1 vote so far . need MOREEEEEE!!!!
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Old 05-17-04, 06:20 PM   #6
boaty
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From: North Carolina
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fat had the flow on lock, imma have to go with him

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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Old 05-17-04, 06:57 PM   #7
delinquent_zero
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From: london
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seen seen, i c im losin but if imma lose i wanna lose wid sum dignity dat means more den 2 votes
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Old 05-17-04, 10:29 PM   #8
DFrost
Flyweight
 
From: NY
aight

IP: 9E83 C44F

fat had more punches altogether but they were mad weak and the flow was FUCKED UP as was structure, ok you lost cause of the d/r votes and this line
you like a clock cause you like to tick my shots//
this dickryders like a glock cause he likes the cock//
i dont think that was even your worst but it pissed me off, u said "like" about as many times as u had lines

delinuent its nothin to be proud of you need a lot of work but you took it here, try lengthening your lines a little and forming harder punches
 
Old 05-18-04, 06:16 AM   #9
delinquent_zero
Flyweight
 
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From: london
IP: 9AE7 AA5A

ight thanks man, like i sed thiswas my fisrt battle on this. im to used to doin garage emceeing where the lines are shorter becos you have to spit faster.
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Old 05-18-04, 02:14 PM   #10
delinquent_zero
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From: london
IP: 9AE7 AA5A

uuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.. .....
cum on more votes ppl
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Old 05-18-04, 05:30 PM   #11
Enhance
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IP: DF7B C8F7

Damn Zero i called you out










No a vet is not calling out a herb ZERO goes to the same school as me.
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Old 05-18-04, 05:33 PM   #12
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From: 2~1~5
IP: 4F30 825C

I Gotta Go Wit fatk4p...neither had anything too special but he definitely came carder than the other dude...1
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Old 05-19-04, 03:28 PM   #13
delinquent_zero
Flyweight
 
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From: london
IP: 9AE7 AA5A

ight wots gwanin wid dis battle, can we pls have more votes.
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Old 05-19-04, 04:07 PM   #14
-O-
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From: So_ILL
IP: 3700 1584

aaight this was close, but ima break it down like this....

Zero- seems like you got the structure down, but your lines were kinda short...and it seemed like a repeating flow over and over....you should try to develop you meta more...but nice drop..

Fat- your opener was def, better...your structure was better as well, didnt have the multi's i was looken for tho...nice drop

Vote = Fat

**I got an audio battle that needs some REAL votes, its -O- Vs SenseR......the link wouldnt work so I couldnt post it

Nice battle tho
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Old 05-19-04, 04:18 PM   #15
WickedWays
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From: united kingdom, it sucks like vacums.
IP: E6B0 8E44

Battle was Blah, Nothing great probably because you forgot to actually spend time on this, I'll vote for zero, Why you may ask...

Well because ever since the creation of Battling online people have aquired a form of writing which i found rather annoying.

I feel anyone can spit 10 bars about the person using Lame wordplay, if you actually read Fat's verse theres nothing in it that disses zero.. Not once in this battle did i notice a name or imagery of what one might do to the other...

People here are voting for the way one peice works without reading it. To be honest can any of you find a defining line in Fats verse which would proove he wrote it too ZERO....?

Although zero verse was indeed basic, i think the short lines aimed straight at fat were more memorable.
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