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Old 05-17-04, 07:35 PM   #1
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Exclamation Hurt.......check it

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"I hurt myself today to see if i still feel"-NIN

PEEP.......

To provoke minds i took a pen and a pad and wrote this verse in rhymes//
to show you a perverse mind...so niggaz can see tha hurt i co-erse in lines//

slittin' wrist is for bitches no doubt i'ma go out like thugs do//
i hate my life i say fuck you approachin' niggaz crews like i'm slug proof//

i can't hang my troubles from ceilin' fans cuz i got it in my mind i'ma take my life but i'ma go out like a man//

see how my miind works is i know knifes hurt but even in suicide i don't wanna feel//
nobody shed for me so if caps peel i won't fear i'm not keepin it real//

its fucked up cuz though i'm hurtin' i refuse to let people hurt my pride//
takin it in stride only hides but how can i be found when i can't cry//

i'ma fuck up can't get my life right i'm on tha mic like yo dog i'm nice right??//

niggaz hear me but they don't HEAR ME i speak clearly but it seems only my life fears me//

my mind asleep but my hearts awakened cuz it knows my body scared cuz yo its life i'm taken//

dr.phil's advice can come and yap but i'm not listenin to half ass psych's who got mo money than i can stack//

i don't got issues i got my own shoes naw mean you gone get yours i got my own dues//

maybe a baby can save me cuz right now my futture is hazy//
i'm like yea FUCK YOU PAY but yo dude...PAY ME//

tha drug game and tha thug thang its love mayne but damn i need a hug mayne//

i can sit with a pistol in my hand sketch in my mind tha plan that i'm bout to die if i pull it//
understand that thas whut its about and i guess i'ma be a thug no doubt since i'ma still die from a bullet//

but i can't.......

so i'ma stay with tha heat til my life's been breached since on tha mic i teach i'ma try to stay tight when i speak//

but know that my life's like a bubble thas bound to bust cuz logically it stays apart of me but my mind's not down to trust//

so fuck that...

i'ma read this again when i got my gun on my chin so when my life carasells spin all of my fears ceases//

cuz i been through life and can't win so i'll commit tha ultimate sin so next time niggaz'll WILL hear me cuz they'll readin' me in peices//.............BANG~!!!!{ya hear me}



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Old 05-18-04, 01:51 AM   #2
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just uppin for feeedbak and thouughtts and feelin' naw meean
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Old 06-02-04, 01:16 PM   #3
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i wasnt feelin it u need to work on ya game iigth keep elevatin good luck kid.........................
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