k, 10-15 bars
no crew or D/R votes
ill go first cause i have to leave soon

hey, actually ill post later 2nite, cause i have to go somwhere right now, srry for the wait.

thats aight i'll just drop my verse right now okay and drop forget
to do it

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my rhymes are so hot I'm suffering from de-hydration
in this battle you know you lose so you suffer from irritation
homie you new to rb I agree you new to being our rap bitch
you tried to type but when keyboard landed on my name it glitched
in your biography it said & you claim your the best
well I agree... if you ever take a stupidity test
you in the S.O.L the recent "Society of Losers"
well with this text battle I will turn into a new loser abuser
we ain't needa know how you spit or your street cred
you ain't the best homie you heard the words that I said
all I can tell you is all we got in common is we both from Canada
but if I knew before I would go back in time & move to Nevada
because I don't wanna live in the country of a whack emcee
because my skills flow longer than the river Yangtze

Fact for people "Yangtze" is the the longest river of Asia

Aight people don't forget to vote when Graphex drops his verse
And Good Luck to you Graphex

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what the fuck you said you were gonna drop your verse later yesterday
night & it's already been a fucking day DROP ALREADY!

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what the fuck it's been 2 fuckin dayz drop your shit already or say if
u ain't dropping wanna get this over with

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im really sorry for the wait, i was able to get to a computer for a few days. Well, heres my flow....

Step up, step up, its lyrical flamez im rockin/
i ripped off your jaw, why you still talkin/
yo chains aint fake, they're real plastic/
im crackin this whack kid just for practice/
my skills so hot you'll be burnin like a sinnin ecclesiastic/
i have riddled lips that impact on stage, that will fuck you up with the facts that i say/
you wanna diss this well i'll react in a way, that makes brains splat and backs break/
i make ya more tense than landin on your nuts on an electric fence/
you cant bare the suspense of my sentence despence/
even my laughter beats you when the battles commence/

ecclesiastic means churchman, just if you was wonderin...

aight than it's aight didn't know that so people vote on this don't sleep on
it now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Aiight good battle all
Aiight I feel Lyrical had batter flow and punches. THey were complex, but easy to understand. Hs structure was good so he did good.
Graphex had a good line but his punches fell short. The whole ecclesiastic line fucked up ya flow, but ya structure was on lockdown.

Da layout-
Lyrical-7/10
Graphex-6.5/10

Ya'll need to learn how to use personnals.

Peace and Props

Returnda favor (in ma sig)

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hands down Graphex shit was wack Lyrikal took it in every category in this battle possible. Graphex even u used words tat everyone knows tat is not 2 simplistic u wouldn't have 2 explain shit

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Holla at me when u stop writing rhymes wit dictionaries shit is dead

thanks for the votes.....well uppin 4 votes need a lot more for this battle
please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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aaight good battle..

Lyricle-try to use more than 2 rhymin words and expand your vocab. and go to the emergency center to learn some new shit aaight cause it would be nice to see one person other than me usin more that 2 words to rhyme wit..

Graphex-nice verse it was strong at first then in the middle it got a little weak but you finished strong...and you also need to expand your vocab. and try to add more personals other than that it was all good.

Im goin for Graphex on dis one..

PLEASE return the favor and help me KO this foo...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124769

Peayce

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

i got to go to lyrical flamez on this one
i like the big vocab, and alot of personal

graphex you were good but i got to give it to lyrical on this

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