you spit first nigga

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10 to 12 lines no feeding d/r or hate votes spit bitch

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yo check it...........


you fat like pat nigga cat in the hat/
you look like croc when he say ka-splat/
nigga go eat dooky/
nigga pek pek nigga pooky/
nigga im a little a im a little b and a c you aint no g/
nigga you a frog on a log tryin to blog/
you fuck wit elmo ill lose you in a fog/
nigga you ugly and you stink/
nigga hella gay straight lookin like pink/
bitch im the dopest nigga/
pullin 39 triggas/
nigga you stink like ass/
ima push you in the grass/
stab you in the throat wit a piece of glass/
ima shake yo booty and ima loose ya/
you a fake ass mutha fooshka/
nigga you better fuckin run/
before this vet shoot yo ass wit a plastic gun/ WHAT!!

yo checkin in

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checkit

it must be something wrong a fucken catshtrophe/
i ask for a rapper and look who god gives me/
im sorry homeboy i got the wrong name/
a nigga who write his rhymes like dis is ashame/
nigga give it up im already da fuckin winner/
ill chew yo and spit you out and save yo ass for dinner/
ill leave yo ass wit wit my fuckin name imprited on ya head/
these nigga a fuckin garden snake leave yo ass blood red/
how he got on the website i dont know how they let dat/
ight nigga nogh wit da game take yo ass back to neo pets/

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yo ppl we need some votes this shit is funny as hell

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Aight... BOMBSHELL took this for sure....... here how i break it down

SOLDIER - you need to elevate, that was pretty bad on your part..

BOMBSHELL - you took this hands down, you had better punches, style, flow, and everything else...

Anyways my vote goes to BOMBSHELL

cmon we need some votes uppin

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LMFAO @ dat first kid's verse.


wack wack wack wack wack

no explanation needed...work on everything...go read one of the VET's battles in elevated and you'll see what i mean


Vote: BOMB, by default...a more complex structure

Aight I Got It Match Up Soldiersnake Vs Finemind Yall Lmmfao Wow
Damn I Dont Want To Explain The Already Explained But The Damn Mods
Yo Soldier -elevate Levitate Fuck Even Masterbate If It Helps All I Can Say Is Check Out Some Shit From Some Other Battles Nice Try Tho
Yo Bomb Holla Back .....do I Really Need To Say Anything Ok Fine
"you Win " Lmmfao
V-bomb

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yo we need some more votes

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ayo drop by my battle and check out my vs against real2def and tell me how it's goin down and who won

Soldier

Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 6/10

Bomb

Flow 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 8/10

v/ BoMb

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

punches:bom
personlas:no one
structure:no one
creativity:no one

vote: bomb

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quote your own damn lyrics...