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Yo Fam,how you gonna try coming to the RB and going againist me/
Forget the MC carrer u wanted,Do ur job and fucking protect me/
When i get done rippin you on this battle you will be begging the mod to reset you/
when i get this nasty,u only fucking started a fucking feud/
Why did you try to bust a flow toward me/
my rhymes is more creamier then krispy Kreams/
Wat kind of name is BlackSmith/
Before this battle even started,you pmed saying i already had diss/
All you can do after this battle is love me and Remaneice/




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This guys playing with words that curse conflict,Hes dying to get killed like death-row-convicts-
this 'small time vet' thought he could mess till he felt 'my techs were too monstrous'..
Killas cams scribbling nonsense, like my presence shattered his confidence-
ill pierce your heart from the start to save yourself, and blacklist your consience...
You flow-les so ill just quench your thirst, hes scared to get murked like posting first-
Ill throw you down head first, like you jaw was on the floor to an make u bite dirt-
not droppin or droppin your regular shit youll still fall, like runnin into brick walls..
Get dragged like U-Hauls, Me carring you is the only time youll stand tall...
Your just plain clear and simple,ill Throw storm cyclones out to twist you-
get beaten soft in the end, like an old man rhyming the blues..

sorry if that looks longer i just got in and rushed it,, it was 10 when i finished it

I dont know if it wuz just where im from that causes me to pronounce wordz different but 4/9 lines did not rhyme with anything. put some personalz in and some mettaz if you can think of any.

[ Quote ]my rhymes is more creamier then krispy Kreams/ [ Unquote ]
^^^not a good line to use in a battle
not a good verse at all.

Nice opener but dropped off a lil bit as you went on. but still better punchez and multiez and all.
i liked your first two barz and after that it wuz not that good. but you were good enough to win.

vote Black smith

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124829
^^^honest votez please

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yo real nice battle work on ur punches tho and keep a good form

im not gonna vote on this battle because killacam is my cousin but he does got skill he told me he would fuck around his first few battles then get sick wit it..and check omega blu and physics battles he did get sick and he has beaten me in real life killacam u fag

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my bad about the structure like i said i rushed it and didnt
have time to structure it..uppin this battle keep em commin

word^^^keep em commin seriously,uppppin ..........

yo, i cant vote but both need to do better next time,
peace

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Killa Cam........i dont even think u even dissed Black smith

Black u murked him period............

This guys playing with words that curse conflict,Hes dying to get killed like death-row-convicts-
this 'small time vet' thought he could mess till he felt 'my techs were too monstrous'..



^^^^^ dat took it there in da beginning

Vote;Blk smith

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