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05-22-04, 10:54 AM
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If thats what you thought
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Street Credibility
IP: D35B 3F85
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Way back, I stayed strapped, Had a gat, Watchin' my back I walk the streets, sellin my crack I do what i feel like I'm on the corner watchin cops ride by I'm clockin' their time, I'm poppin the nine At any person that be thinkin' they jesus (verse 1) These young boys try to teach me a lesson But, I told these kids it's nothing hustle is my profession I set shop, run blocks under my descretion I cut pies to divide, split them up into sections I terrorize, vandalize, analyze their weapons I let the coke boil in pots, watch it get hard like an erection Snitches don't talk giving confessions To the police, information leak, having us stressin Thinkin' of interrogators asking us questions Don't put me under pressure, I ain't giving suggestions And that dude that wanna snitch, gone be wantin' protection I swear the god, yes wanting protection I take charge like I won the election I'm the number one overall draft pick best selection I'm bettin' that you'll know I'm the newest edition I Move weight like the world's strongest man competion F.ck it................I got the workers in the kitchen In the room is, naked women, supplying crack addiction (Hook 2x) Way back, I stayed strapped, Had a gat, Watchin' my back I walk the streets, sellin my crack I do what i feel like I'm on the corner watchin cops ride by I'm clockin' their time, I'm poppin the nine At any person that be thinkin' they jesus You get reese to pieces, I never got bagged for my cases People callin me gangsta, Never petrified from the gun blast You'll dudes run fast when you'll hear my sh.t Like two shots from the pistols Put two holes in your chest, take place of your nipples From down bottom is where its at. west philly...and all my DE peeps....representing the Blueprint.....
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05-22-04, 10:59 AM
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IP: DF7B C8F7
You Shoulda have collabed with me
 Good Piece Though Good Vocab But the last two lines were weak should have not put it there it sounded like you had Writers block at the end it was and overal 7.5/10 . .
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S-Own Squod RB Text Tourney Finalist Orginal Relaunched Member. Password Aka The Masked 2nd Moderator on Rapverse Ever Not quite legendary yet.... Last edited by M - Section : 05-22-04 at 12:45 PM. |
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05-22-04, 11:35 AM
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*D.I.E*
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IP: A7A1 AC63
what are you talkin about, theres only 1 verse there
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05-22-04, 12:06 PM
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New to RB
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IP: BD88 B8CC
Yea I Thought It Was OK, But You Dont Need To Talk About Gunz That Much.....
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05-22-04, 12:17 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 4FB9 4699
Good Flow Nice Hook....Needs Some More Wordplay
7/10
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05-22-04, 02:55 PM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: C1DA C961
Man if you gon do a street verse it has to be hot, cuz that shit is redone over an over, on yours was real basic an sounded like every other nigga claiming the streets, man I thought you would have dropped better than that, an chorus needs serious work man, no hate jus truth
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Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice Because at the end of the day, you get what you give So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is |
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05-22-04, 04:23 PM
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If thats what you thought
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IP: D35B 3F85
nah too tell you'll the truth...this was some old sh.t like way back that i had stored in memory so why not put it on here....and as you can tell i don't really care if this piece was all that..just trying something different. ....that's why i don't like rapping about gunz and shit....because people that aint from no hood and never seen sh.t like that...don't know a damn thing that i am talking about.......do anyone agree with me on that.
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05-24-04, 05:45 PM
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If thats what you thought
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IP: D35B 3F85
just uppin to the first page
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05-24-04, 05:49 PM
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IP: DF7B C8F7
"get hard like an erection" cmon man.. dont need shit like that..
Was aiite peice tho.. |
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05-24-04, 07:01 PM
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If thats what you thought
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IP: D35B 3F85
i know right....but thanks for your feed back.....
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05-25-04, 12:01 PM
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If thats what you thought
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IP: D35B 3F85
up............. this....................... shit....................
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06-11-04, 05:47 AM
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If thats what you thought
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IP: D35B 3F85
I appreciate all the positive comments..
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06-11-04, 06:42 PM
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IP: D35B 3F85
appreciate it............
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06-16-04, 10:13 PM
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New to RB
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IP: A3EA 639E
it was ok at da beginning den u fall off at da end but u did dat stay up on ur game & perfect ur rhyming skills
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