10-16 lines
checkin in 20
you spit first

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record~9-2 (6 ko'z)

aight aight checkin......Good Luck Dogg...........

alright im checkin in..... you spit first.... good luck

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record~9-2 (6 ko'z)

are you spittin or what... hurry up cause i got to go

thanks...

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alright alright
newb......newb

here we go.....

Yo when I spit, it's golden, lace it and wrap it//
Racin thru raps, I'll replace ya face with this gat//
Sixteen in the clip, six move thru your back//
That's ten left for ya body dun, in case you can't add//
Wit no places to stay, all my statements is made//
And DeLeon aint fuckin stoppin til all my payments is paid//
I was raised on these streets so in the game I invest//
Best believe if we havin beef, I aint aimin at ya chest//
I always got 16 in the clip wit one in the chamber//
My gun fucked so many dudes, kats call it a flamer//
If you disrespect DeLeon, ya'll can float in a river//
Quiet kats kill, I'm so humble but promotin my trigga//
For the simple fact that I was taught to preach what i am//
Thats why my speech comes from what I do, not what I think I can//
an while you fukin spittin, get in touch wit ya self//
Fight ya struggles on ya own and stop fussin for help/

Done!

Man.....U ain't as hot as I though you were Mr. rookie of the month.U suckk ass.In case you don't know...you stole my award.So I'm callin u out in bitch board.Unless this other guy is so whack...he gonna merk u.But now...I'm a leave you Deloen.

You come up thinking you can battle
but after I rip on you u go to ur mom and tattle
cause my rhymes are for real
eat u up like thanksgiving a full course meal
your immature probably like dragon ball z
your dicks so small you hit ur balls when you pee
cause I don’t think you know the shit im bringing
you try to throw punches but don’t even know where your swingin
rookie of the month you really think you’re the shit don’t you
your rhymes are weak and you’re a faggot you know that’s true
im a true mc.. I come up with originality like crazy
spit so hard make deleons eye’s go lazy
man its shame this battle had to end this way
I just got one more thing to say
RED DOT IS HERE TO STAY

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record~9-2 (6 ko'z)

somebody please vote on this... im interested to see who won!

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record~9-2 (6 ko'z)

aight battle i gotta go wit reddot on dis one he had betta punches

yo check. reddot had some good punches. i liked that lazy eye one. deleon, u rap way too much about the same thing, yer gun. thats gay, u sound like that bitch 50.

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reddot06 took this punches hit harder DeLeon this for real is
not your best drop at all I saw you do a shitload better in one of
your others but your structure was good.........

could you do a honest vote on mine:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125133

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Basically deleon kiilled the other guy with better flow better punches I was definetly feeling his drop. Red dot elevate on your punches your structure was good you got the flow of things. But my vote definetly goes for DE

I felt redot more I like both verses but dot gets my vote

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REAL2DEF VS. Yo-YO