i spit first 4-10 lines
no crew votes
no hater votes

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record~9-2 (6 ko'z)

beggina mc i heard of you before your not to good
you try to act like something like your from the hood
you use the excuse your only 13 years old
well battling me was a mistake you should have listened to what you were told
you get hypothermia your rhymes are soo cold
bitch your freezing your rhymes are like an icycle
maybe its cause u got more cum in ur belly than you got in ur testicle
this isnt the best shit that i ever laid down
but this bitch cant rhyme go back to ur home town

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record~9-2 (6 ko'z)

Why do they call u reddot?
Iz it becuase u kno not who ya fuckin wit
or is it becuz u startin shit
sayin i'm 13 dont matter
to reach my skill level u need a ladder
beratta in one hand chedda in the otha
u ready for a cap in da head i'm holdin it steady
U wanksta neva shot no one so why u fakin?
Guess what my rhyme is done
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MORE SUCKINESS FROM ME GUYS!

some1 vote on this please.........................

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record~9-2 (6 ko'z)

ok if i could vote on this it would be reddot
but i can't cause he so to be in the crew
beggina you shit was the simplest peace of shit i ever heard plus you bite off of everything reddot said.
Reddot you had alot of nice ass personnals
and just wondering are you just joking beggina or is that really al you got?

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oh and dude you beggina you bit my line: to reach my skill level u need a ladder
of course when i used it it actully went well with the ryhme

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basically none of the verses hit real hard but I really have to say
that reddot06 most definitely won this hands down punches not good
at all flow not that well structure was half-decent

vote goes to: reddot06

do a honest vote on my shit: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126013

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yo no contest reddot had this down. beggina practice up. dont battle so much. u lose everytime. u had no flow and no good rhymes.

reddot

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reddot06 owned dis battle....

Flow:
ur rhymes flowed pretty good ur structure added 2 it....

Vocab:
you have an average or a bit above average vocab alot better wording than Beggina MC...

Personals and Punchlines:
you had a couple here and there the ones u had were good (6.5 or 7/10)
i espicially liked
beggina mc i heard of you before your not to good
you try to act like something like your from the hood
that was ok... but one of ma favourite lines from u.....

Overall:
7/10

Beggina MC: u wern't dat good everthing u spit was basic

Vocab:
was below average... poor usage or your words...

Flow:
wasn't to great but your getting there........ your structure was good though so it added to your flow...

Punchlines and Personals:
u didn't really have any but w.e.
this was probubly your best line

u ready for a cap in da head i'm holdin it steady
U wanksta neva shot no one so why u fakin?

Overall: 5/10 (some advice practice)

Winner: reddot06
because of his vocab, personals and punchlines also Beggina MC didn't stand a chance he just didn't come out strong overall...
also i thought this line alone won u dis battle

maybe its cause u got more cum in ur belly than you got in ur testicle

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damn reddot merked u beggina atleast u admitted it wasnt good...u need work on ur punches and flow beggina
reddot dat shit had iight punches i seen betta from u but u got my vote
holla