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05-25-04, 09:44 PM
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The Truth
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Perplexion
IP: B682 856F
My Confusion of Life has left me with no Conclusion.. I Embrase Moments of Love yet they Seem to be an Allusion.. Im Lost in Thought i Need to Find my Right Mind.. Spend Time Were My Emotions were Right i need to Rewind.. My Ability to Express My True Feelings has been Strenuos.. Days on End Unable to Think Cleary Sadness is Continuous.. I Must Try and Find were My Heart Once and Always Rested.. Emotion's have Run High My Concious Has Been Tested.. Praying to God for Any extra Help seem's to be Refused.. With My Brain Warped it has left my Bogged and Confused.. Now Seeing My Thought's Written out and Expressed.. I Now must Gather Myself to Find out why im Perplexed..
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05-26-04, 06:51 AM
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New to RB
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IP: BE1D 476D
Nice. I think it's really relatable... the flow was flawless, good use of vocab,
I Must Try and Find were My Heart Once and Always Rested.. Emotion's have Run High My Concious Has Been Tested.. Now Seeing My Thought's Written out and Expressed.. I Now must Gather Myself to Find out why im Perplexed.. ^^^^^ Favourite lines. Not a lot to say, but I think poetry's all about emotion and that was def something you didn't lack... so keep doin ya thing n stay up... ~1~ |
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