Still Uppin this shit....... Eeeeeooo Weeeeoooo... Chosen

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Uppn, dont let dis sleep...

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

UppN

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

UppN...

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

Yo UppN, dont let this sleep dawg COME on.

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

Ya styles like missin "homework" with ya writtens-wheres-the-"science"?
Your whole "20Grands" - "Counter-fit" like a "Kitchen-Air" appliance nice...
My-Flows Hard-to-Break with your soft rhymes like Im Virgin-Hymen
The only time "20" can come-hard is when he Flirtin-By-Men nah...played
Ima bout to smoke LL like a "Cool-J"- Ya rhymes Don't-"IM-press"
like you aint chattin with news scoops about ya "broken-text" aiight...a lil vague
(LL = Lyrical Legendz -Read that again cuz u missed it)
Drenchen you with a sickness of baths in Clap-infested-piss-n-syphliss
The Only time ya crew excell has-been-when-Tested-For-Bittin-Scriptures ok...no rhyne
SevenThirds the Only Lyrical Legend here- I kill fools with thumb-holds
20Grand aint "Half of me" But his chest still got more'n one-"whole"
(Just start over again I know it's hard) again vague..not straightforward
Wishin everyone of our members would join ya crew Postin-n-Gettin-Pissy
You wishin you were down wit D2R so you put Tony-Self in ya Siggy nice
You Couldn't Take out one of us- That's why You left-Tonys-Name-In
Ya Sig maker can't rhyme or even do the job you homies-gave-him nice....original
I spit-Flurries- Ya sig says "Call Me Tyme Cuz I Cant Be Stopped"
But 7Thir(d) hault ya flow like rippin batteries outta-clock not much flow..but pretty nice
your verse had aiight flow, good vocab, complexity, and attempt at wordplay but its too vague. Like you gotta make sure everyone understands it.

Its time to take action, sick of these fake niggas actin//
my ryhmes sicka than the rolls on ricki lake smackin//ok...basic
Mac-10 ejects rounds, betta yet inspect clowns//
Think your on blessed grounds? your "realality check bounced"//
Ill through "blessed rice", cuz we "engaged" in a battle//
Make u the "laughin stock" of RB, like "humerous cattle"//ok....
Your metas make no "sence", couldnt "pay" to put it in words''
All ur ryhmes are "irrational", thats why u "seventhirds"// nice personall..
Got "dick on ur brain"? cuz ur mind aint "straight"//
U tryn to battle 20 GraND, U know u a flyweight?//ok...
Like a tornado through mobile homes, im about to blow u away//
None of ur shit flys, so keep it off the airway//ok....
You challange me? Ill come to ur door like UPS and deliver//
Ill rip you to shreds, crush u, and cut u like "rock paper scissors" nice nice....
There i just killed u and no one will report it//
Cuz a story about death is only a story if the victim is important// nice ending........,

k honestly this is a enough vote cause 20 grand had A multie and his flow and understanding was better. he didnt use elevated vocab and not as complex, so seventhirds got it there. but I gotta give the vote to 20 grand for clearer punches. here are some examples
Your metas make no "sence", couldnt "pay" to put it in words''
All ur ryhmes are "irrational", thats why u "seventhirds"// nice personall..

There i just killed u and no one will report it//
Cuz a story about death is only a story if the victim is important//

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A... vote or ill cut yo throat lol holla
UppN

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

severn 3rd won this because of his punches hit harder and had better performance overall. I could read his more easerly because of his structure and flow was spot on and beat the other guy by his rhymes, multies and flow. The other guy did ok but not problebly his best rap, try better next time.

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yo yo yo, i am like tupac cuz of rhymez/
and lyrikaly i can beat-you-up-criminally//
i am a killer and you cant sway me/
because man brendas got a baby// (dope)
can u imagine me being less then the dopest man/~
hell no dawg, cuz im almost as dope as 50 cent man//

UppN

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

Pretty Nice Battle, This IS How I Break It Down:

creativity:seventhird
punches:20
flow:20
structure:tie
opener:seven third
closer:20

seven third
Ya Opener Was Hott and Had Not Bad Flow, But The Rest OF Ya Verse Was Average
Ya styles like missin "homework" with ya writtens-wheres-the-"science"?
Your whole "20Grands" - "Counter-fit" like a "Kitchen-Air" appliance

20 Ya Verse Was Bangin!Good Punches, good flow, and a good enuff closer to pull out the win

vote = 20 Grand

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Lines Crush Ya 'n' Make Ya Appendix Burst In Ya Nutsack, Ya Rhymes Are Crap So I Flush You Like Ya Came From An Ass Crack/

Fourmost aka Verb