10 lines....
no biteing......

are u ready to fell my rath...

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kon vick mailbox [IMG]KON VICK

EMINEM's ^^^ Slim Shady lp

Den Den Den Den Den Den, Go go gadget dick!
Whipped that shit out, and aint no doubt about it
It hit the ground and caused an earthquake and power outage
I shouted "Now bitch, lets see who gets the best!"
Stuffed that shit in crooked and fucked that fat slut to death (Ahh!! Ahhh!)

think before u speak....

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kon vick mailbox [IMG]KON VICK

EMINEM's ^^^ Slim Shady lp

Den Den Den Den Den Den, Go go gadget dick!
Whipped that shit out, and aint no doubt about it
It hit the ground and caused an earthquake and power outage
I shouted "Now bitch, lets see who gets the best!"
Stuffed that shit in crooked and fucked that fat slut to death (Ahh!! Ahhh!)

let me slow it down for ya coz if ure going to fast i might ignore ya/
yo u is retarded my rymes i keep gaurded coz there partically gold yours couldnt get sold for a quarter my technique keeps getting hotter and hotter u are like the rap harry potter i might have to slaughter the reast of ure family if they see me kill u/
wot are u gonna do wen i come for u and all u can do is kiss my shoe for forgivness all my boys wouldnt wanna miss this wen i chop off ure head leave it i na bread basket i go i can rymes 10 times betta than u so thats why i do wot i gotta do. watch as my knives go staright through you/
u aint noting but a foo'

u want to rap against me talk'in about kill'in,fuck it I have Em's blood in me I'm a criminal but I'm not a villain/but I'm crazy an my words are delirious,u done did it now this is my turn to get series/your a dealer with no cards in yo deck,no respect for me before I tie this rope around yo neck/I got yo nuts I put them down yo throte,now this MCs started cough'in I believe hes going to chock/my style is so sick I can never quit,I'm crazy enough to go up (****) an tell him to suck my dick/

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kon vick mailbox [IMG]KON VICK

EMINEM's ^^^ Slim Shady lp

Den Den Den Den Den Den, Go go gadget dick!
Whipped that shit out, and aint no doubt about it
It hit the ground and caused an earthquake and power outage
I shouted "Now bitch, lets see who gets the best!"
Stuffed that shit in crooked and fucked that fat slut to death (Ahh!! Ahhh!)

nice spit every one uppin cmon we need votes up ihn this mutha fucka

both of ya can't flow 4 shit I ain't even gonna vote cause shit was dumb wack

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Holla at me when u stop writing rhymes wit dictionaries shit is dead

DAmN YA"LL IS WACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aiight heres the rip apart-
Gauvin Ya rhymes were simplistic and held no punch. KIss your shoe, are you fucking kidding? Ya flow sucked and ya structure sucked.

Lover Boy ya Had Weak Punches But At least he fucken had some. Ya stucture and FLow were whack and Ya need Personnals.

Damn You two couldn't be whiter
Gauvin-1/10
Loverboy-2/10

Return da favor in Ma Sigh if you can.

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I've Been Gone Longer Than You Been Writing

gavin won this because he had the better verse overall because his sounded better more smoohter with the punches and just the better perofrmance overall. The other verse didn't hit as hard because it had weak punches and wern't as good.

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yo yo yo, i am like tupac cuz of rhymez/
and lyrikaly i can beat-you-up-criminally//
i am a killer and you cant sway me/
because man brendas got a baby// (dope)
can u imagine me being less then the dopest man/~
hell no dawg, cuz im almost as dope as 50 cent man//

Yo I Vote On Gavin Cuz He Had Betta Punches And It Sounded Smoothly// Lover Boy U Need To Work On Dem Punches Hit Hard Next Time// Yo Whole Verse Was Played Out Homie//

Gavin Nice Homie But Work On Dem Punches Also Hit Hard// U Good But It Could Been Betta

Vote=gavin

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IAM BACK FUCKAH'Z HELL~! NEVA LOOKED SO GOOD

Gavin:

Flow: 2/10
Metas: None
Multis: 2/10
Word Play: 1/10

Overall: 2/10


Lover Boy:

Flow: 1/10
Metas: None
Multis: None
Wordplay 1/10

Overall: 1/10


Vote: Gavin


Keep elevatin Yall...

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RoYal SicKneSS

http://www.soundclick.com/niSe

yall need a lotta work if ya wanna be good, lover boy took it for havin some weak ass lines that resembled punches opposed to gavins weak ass lines that did not resemble punches

gavin won this because of his punches that came across more better smoother to read, with better vocab, rhymin, flowing, and word play. This was a close match but I think the other guy lost this because og his week verse performance and thats why the other player wasn't as good. Keep rying though and elevate.

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yo yo yo, i am like tupac cuz of rhymez/
and lyrikaly i can beat-you-up-criminally//
i am a killer and you cant sway me/
because man brendas got a baby// (dope)
can u imagine me being less then the dopest man/~
hell no dawg, cuz im almost as dope as 50 cent man//

..weak battle..

gavin
Flow 5/10
Rhymes 5/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 5/10
Humor 5/10

lover
Flow 4/10
Rhymes 5/10
Structure 4/10
Punches 5/10
Humor 5/10

v/ gavin

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

WHACKEST BATTLE I HAVE EVER VOTED ON IN MY LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ok both verses I wasn't feelin' at all it was the worst didn't like the punches,
flow, structure fo real ya'll need to elevate this is whacker than my first battle!!!!!!!!! but in punches Gavin overlooked lover boy!

so vote goes to: Gavin

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