Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio |
05-23-04, 09:28 PM | #1 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
|
pimp rawb vs. troublesome
IP: 275E DC37
deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 line min. 16 line max.
__________________
win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
|||||||
05-23-04, 09:29 PM | #2 | |||||||
Light Weight
|
IP: 84AD 8ED3
10-12
good luck |
|||||||
05-24-04, 11:14 AM | #3 | ||||||
Flyweight
|
IP: FD0E A708
Siging In
__________________
*NET RECORD* ...................134-31................... |
||||||
05-27-04, 10:43 AM | #4 | ||||||
Flyweight
|
IP: 0A05 95E5
Ya Spit Almost In An Other Lanuage...Might Need Some 1 To Translate-Langustics/
I Flip Shit And Vibrate-Ya-Cystics...You Drop At What I Call Rate-Simplistic/ Ya Vision See Da Future Wrong Ya Fate-Is-Opticmistic(Optic Mistake)/ I Spray-N-Drop-Physics Wit Devine Forces Like Newtons-Laws/ Iam Sending Gama Rays Through-Ya-Jaws To Leave You Cancerous Wit No-Cause/ At Tha Sound Of Appluase I Comit Tha Perfect Killing With No Flaws... Its Like Tha Purest Carbon...I Send Arrows Through Flows Like A Harpoon/ And Demolish Troublesome In Tha Bargain... He Just Bacteria In Ma Clothes...He Came From My New Jersey/ But Now He Spinning In Ma Washing Machine As I Apply Some Persil Heavy!/ That Was Peanuts,Dawg You Literally Got Took To Tha Cleaners/ You Couldnt have Sick Spits If u Ate Ur Greeners In Litres....
__________________
*NET RECORD* ...................134-31................... |
||||||
05-27-04, 11:32 PM | #5 | |||||||
Light Weight
|
IP: 84AD 8ED3
Fire aint the word son, you're surely far from hot
Fuck winning this by a hair, i'm bout to open up a barber shop Now you can try to "grasp" his concepts, but the wackness may hinder Nobody's feelin' his shit, like flushin' frostbitten fingers Your style is newbish kid, can't get accepted into the worst crew You should change ya name to... "I-dash-my-multies and Capitolize Every Word In My Verse Too" Half your lines don't make sense, future isn't looking too bright You force wordplay and vocab, yet you can't even spell em right Face it kid, you're plain wack, you could never be raw b Everyone knows "P.I.M.P." got played out by BET and MTV Nobody challenges me, they've seen what Trouble can brew Lay you on ya back in front of McDonald's so you can see your first W |
|||||||
05-28-04, 01:48 AM | #6 | |||||
retired.
|
IP: 919D 9DA1
Blah. first dude had no punches at all... forced mutlis etc.
barbershop line was nice, the rest were pretty weak personals but got the job done. v/ troublesome.
__________________
RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!
|
|||||
05-28-04, 07:55 AM | #7 | ||||||
Flyweight
|
IP: CE37 389D
Dawg I Frestyled That Shit And Ur Just Dumb Cuz Ma Vesre Got Punches And Personals...LoL
__________________
*NET RECORD* ...................134-31................... |
||||||
05-28-04, 04:06 PM | #8 | |||
The Truth
|
IP: B682 856F
Ok ez vote
Rawb-U didnt mention him once for Personals and ur Punches wernt Very hard.Flow was Ok and Structure was bad. Trouble-Pretty good Punches Personals were Good u stayed on ur Flow and ur Structure was good. Rawb=6.323/10 Trouble=7.323/10 Vote/Trouble
__________________
~Epion Entertainment Looking for Artist's PM me for Details~ |
|||
05-29-04, 12:52 AM | #9 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
|
IP: C1DA C961
Not a impressive battle at all, both catz dropped weak but someone's gotta win
Rawb.....multies are nice but they got to be leading somewhere, you had verse full of fillers an forced multies, no punches or personals Trouble.....you had a weak verse, you did have visible punches an personals but they were really weak, but at least you had some so u get my vote Vote: Trouble
__________________
Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice Because at the end of the day, you get what you give So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is |
|||||||
05-29-04, 09:12 AM | #10 | |||
Skadoosh!
|
IP: D6BB 7D8C
this week man the league has had some disappointing battles
and this was another one of them pimp - dude ure flow was aight but choppy in places cuz ure structure was messed up i think. u had no real punches and there wasn't a single personal in there that i cud find, u did use forced multis to. troublesome - ure spit was weak to but ure flow was aight and ure structure was gud. u had some punches and a couple of nice personals which is what i thought took the battle for u. V/ - troublesome |
|||
05-29-04, 05:59 PM | #11 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
|
IP: 275E DC37
breakdown for pimp rawb:
flow:nice job here really working well nice multis at the start 7/10 volcab:solid work here too really lighting it up in these catergories 7/10 punches:not too much here though weak spot in your verse best line,"I Flip Shit And Vibrate-Ya-Cystics...You Drop At What I Call Rate-Simplistic/Ya Vision See Da Future Wrong Ya Fate-Is-Opticmistic(Optic Mistake)/" 6/10 overall:20/30 breakdown for troublesome: flow:workin not on the same level as pimp rawb though 6/10 volcab:average nothing to run home about though 6/10 punches:best part of your verse you did real well on addressing your oppenent every line fav line,"Nobody's feelin' his shit, like flushin' frostbitten fingers" good job with the punches 8/10 overall:22/30 vote--troublesome gets this, if pimp rawb had had just a couple of more punches it would of been different
__________________
win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
|||||||
05-30-04, 02:04 AM | #12 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
|
IP: 0F7A 2931
Pimp Rawb - Sucked
Troublesome - Didn't ^ Vote - Troublesome
__________________
|
||||
05-30-04, 02:09 AM | #13 | |||||||
Most Wanted
|
IP: 0CD4 8C79
Urm....I think trouble took this 1 but not by much...it was a weak battle idk wat ya was doing probably doing some homework or reading lol while writing but both of ya need ot elevate and actually try doing some real rapping shit next time iight
Trouble=vote
__________________
|
|||||||
05-30-04, 03:54 AM | #14 | |||||
I'm So Punny
|
IP: 95FF 1D86
easy decision...vote troublesome...he just had better and more punches...that is what this is all about...
he didn't have great structure or multi's but the punches were there... so vote troublesome
__________________
|
|||||
05-30-04, 08:46 PM | #15 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
|
IP: 275E DC37
troublesome wins
__________________
win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
|||||||
Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
Display Modes | |
|
|