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LADYLYRICAL 5 55.56%
gotaasswhoopin4U 4 44.44%
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Old 05-25-04, 04:04 PM   #16
~Lady Fiya~
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*she aint gotta cook crack, jus look at ya mirror refelction/
you aint gotta buy wonders, she can make bread wit her nasty ass yeast infection/
i dont need a multi or a fuckin vocabulary/
ill kill this bitch, wit the fuckin disses in my adversary/
why battle nobodys ever heard of ya/
shes the gulliest on this site, she swallows, shes a kid murderer/

^^^best lines of gotasswhoopin’4you had me dying laughin’ and they all rhymed… Structure could have been fixed up a lil’ bit…

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*im known to distort ya optics and verbally torture...
this kids a nobody thats why he HAS NO SIGNATURE//
this pussy~get ~penetrated more then the victims of the nicca in his aviator...(micheal Jackson)

->NONE of those words rhymed they all end with ture/tor but don’t rhyme…
The second line is feedin’ cuz u call him a nobody after he says “nobody’s ever heard of ya… It was stil funny so u get some props huh?...

this nicca must be retarded cuz his words have no lyrical meaning...
diction lost when he registered cuz i thought his verse made sence til i read the beginning//(he cant spell)
meeting ya death and takin an "L" is the only time he could say he fallin to heat...
this nicca PMin me is the only time he'll have a female privately

->I actually liked these lines BUT meaning and beginning don’t rhyme as well as heat and privately don’t… just because they end with similar letters don’t mean they rhyme…

i jus came off the top, no prewritten practice/
she got hit up more times than 50 cent...cum shots that is/…
the fact that it seems that he came off the top of his head make it more interestin’ and funny as hell…

my vote: gotasswhoopin’4you
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Old 05-25-04, 06:50 PM   #17
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uppin 4 votes.....................will return the favor....
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Old 05-25-04, 06:54 PM   #18
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shes the gulliest on this site, she swallows, shes a kid murderer/

right there sums this shit um man nice job with the punches you merked her and i liked it the punches metas and word play were all there i like this piece alot

lady you need to work more on you strucher it will convey your word play allitle better and make your punches hit harder

v/ gataasswopin
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Old 05-25-04, 06:57 PM   #19
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yo return the favor link is in the sig
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Old 05-26-04, 04:27 PM   #20
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uuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nn..........
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Old 05-26-04, 05:52 PM   #21
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my vote goes to lady hot flow good punches everything was hott good battle
gotaasswhoopin yo shit was hot but her's was hotter


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Old 05-26-04, 07:49 PM   #22
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iight 4-3 Lady umm that person on the front still aint poll his vote so thats why its 4 and miss the first two lines ryhmed then the last one was another bar which i just put by itself if you needed me to seperate it then whateba and i aint feed cuz i aint even read his verse and it only made sence to call him a nobody if you look at his sig it was just a personal so ppl understand and then vote 1
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Old 05-26-04, 07:55 PM   #23
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Ooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh.......u Bitter Ahahahahahahahahahaha
Im The Most Respected In A Hood Near U...come Get Me...sexy...
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Old 05-26-04, 11:09 PM   #24
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Muh Fuckas Vote.............ill Return Favors..plz Vote
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Old 05-27-04, 10:17 AM   #25
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->LadyLyrical, No matter how you try to explain it, it didn't "rhyme" ya shit was alright but the vote stays... get at me.
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Old 05-27-04, 07:32 PM   #26
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Old 05-27-04, 08:02 PM   #27
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Ma Just Plz Close ya mouth and dont post in my thread Cuz Thats Why Ppl dont vote cuz they look and see madd replies 4-3 uppin people 1nEz....and like i said i aint even read ya verse to this day...so how the fuck am i a bitter
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Old 05-28-04, 05:36 PM   #28
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I Said U Were Bitter As In Mad...not A Biter...crimpet....uppppiiinnnn....will Return Favors
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Old 05-28-04, 05:45 PM   #29
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both verses were aight but i would have to go wit Lady on this one

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Old 05-28-04, 08:29 PM   #30
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gotaass had decent lines, flow was a lil off, the ending was weak, and you had some nice personals, but the flow was a lil off. You gotta come with the harder punches, I said the personals were nice, but they played so Im not gonna give an example....cause there isnt one good enough to show...sry i mite be a lil hard on you.

k not by much, but the girl took this for the following better flow and vocabulary....therefore, making the verse more complex. you didnt have that many punchlines but these two were nice and prolly won you the battle, but please avoid like the only time you hard is watching men cause that is played out.....thanx....good battle...peace no hate....hope both are satisfied with what I said
reclinin ya spine back to pop ya spinal cord so you could really say you bent over
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