12-16bars
no d/r
no crew
keystyle
post in 20 minutes after we make sure everything is proper

16 bars is kinda much...thats like 32 lines..how about just 10 -15 lines

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i meant 12-16 lines my bad but other than that is everything straight?

yup you drop now,...............pce

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if ur bars were a runny nose u couldn't make ur flows ill//
and if u murder nostrals u still wouldn't have nose kill//(no skill)

(flow of the runny nose when ur sick)
(nose kill=murdered nostrals nose kill sounds like no skill)

Dell, Mac, Compaq
creativitie, it's obvious that u under a comp list//( under accomplish)
while my style is sick, u barely makin 'em naceous//

(under a comp list=under accomplish- under a comp list=his name is under a list of computers)

god this isn't fair some-1 please stop it//
i'm a great, while create ate peppers 4 a month straight 2 try n drop hot shit//

(peppers r hot-wut u eat u shit-drop a verse)

the facts is simple, n-e-1 from Sacramento//
couldn't rap 4 shizz-o his flow is only gangsta cause it's so crippled//

(crip=gang-crip=crippled)

fuck a verse i'll write a song 4 u like u 1 of my dead homies//
cause creativitie is about as creative as toni tone tony//

(toni tone tony was a singing group-i didn't think their name was very creative

these emcees piss me off like bad bladders//
so i have em set up to get they head cut off like the mad hatter//

(bad bladders obviously piss alot)
(he had Alice set up in Alice in Wonderland durin a tea party)

i go first n break the ice like a fat figure skater//
n end createtive like i'mm end this verse, c that nigga lata//

(when u start u break the ice-fat figure skaters would probably break ice)
(the last line i 4got wut i was gonna say n just put n-e-thing)

(on the accomplish line 4give the "structure" but it was the only way 2 put that)

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125499
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126693

weak spit..i will drop in alil bit..i aint boutto prewrite i just got to go to lunch pce

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.....kid while your a FLY wieght... i defy the laws of gravity//
sacramento is known for making KINGS so bow down to ur majesty//
i got these sick verses...dat got you covering your face like sars//
Aillight you a wack mc... when you got to explain your bars//
kid i got you looking up to me...like if you was sucking my dick//
had to define ur bars...scared dat kids wouldnt comprehend ur spit//
see im bout to be kind wit my narcotics...& give you these dope~lines//
im such a ill son~of~a~gun u would think my parents were both~nines//
kid you like a constipated eskimo the way you never drop hot shit//
im endin this since in your 3rd bar you had told me to stop~this//

weak spit but who cares..............

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Create, took it in all categories. Aillight i thought u mightve had it until creat spit, he took it all. Good Battle Respect 2 both


ALSO PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR

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I don't think either of you really tried on this one. I'ma give it to Creativite, he had some punches, some wordplay. Aillight, you had some punches, but they were a bit too complicated. (I don't think many people have heard oftoni tone tony)

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Create had this one...he had took it in some of the categories. Aillight he almost had this one..but when Creat came up and spit'd...he had this one

Vote = creaTivitie

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Create, took it in all categories. flow structure punches personals everything

Aillight- i hate it when ppl explain or give an explanation afta every single bar
i thought ya flow was off at times and punches were aight but not as good as create


v/create

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