aight

5 bars
i dont care who go first
no feedin bitin or swayin votez
and verse is due by tonight.

aight get ready...

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let me know when its poppin ok
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126663
someone hit this up pleez i need votes
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...684#post1313684

ayo

Ya aint gone "Sqeek" a "Win Threw" like Dead Mice gettin tossed in a "Tornado'z Path"/(Squeek is concidered onomatopoeia)
Ya Cradlez Crashed, and you get "Lay"ed down quicker then a Empty Patato Bag/Chipz
Im Comin out in a "Spur" of the "Moment" like "Watch"in Cowboy Bootz on Waynez Feet/
Ill make ya Brain Speak, and leave you "Cut Up" in more Stripz than Cocain Streakz/
You must be Nutz thinkin you gone win, you just End up wit ya Groin Cut/
If you think you "Sound Sick" you betta Record ya self Throwin Up/onomatopoeia are soundz that exemplafy a word
Mix ya Voice Box wit Tabbaco you still wouldnt be Smokin The Best Vet/
You aint got a chance to escape Digestion only cuz i aint Eight the other Seven Yet/ate
Accuracy Countz, so ya punchez dont need to Fly unlezz they all Come Out Landin/
Cuz i aim to rip ya "Spine" out while in da Streetz so you can say you "Out Standin"/


aight you up

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what the fuck this is damn easy//
i got time to eat, sleep, shit , and still win, foe' sheezy//

who the hell r u, dont ever call me out//
my rhymes will choke u to death, they'll make u scream and shout//

one more line lemme finish this shit quick//
i gotta oozie in the back, but i only gotta spray one lick//

line one:
what the fuck this is damn *to* damn easy

i need 1 more vote pleez
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126663
someone hit this up pleez i need 2 votes
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...684#post1313684

that was more than 5 u cheatin cuntpickin subwoofer-mouth mongoose

wow physique got this easily with better punches and wordplay
on both sides the punches were weak but physique had better wordplay which won himn the battle

onamonapia u just can weak neva do a versse that short agian unless they pack wit punches they werent even punches

v/ physique for better wordplay and punches

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2 lines=1 bar dumbfuck
this battle was weak as hell and id just like to say i can destroy either of you.
punches-phys
flow-oni
structue-oni
wordplay and vocab-phys
originality/ creativity- phys
vote=physique

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i guess ill vote when i hit 50 posts..............

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Uppin .

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uppin 4 oni

uppin