10-12 lines
house rules
time limit: give me atleast an hour and a half cuz i got to write a verse for another site first

Aight...yo check it... old shit

Yu'll Cease to Exist like a Disease that will Dismantle~Yur~Health
So go ahead and Grab yur Dick, i'll just let yu Handle~Yurself

This Kid Couldn’t Flow Hard if he Cut His Femoral Artery
Yu must be Typing in Clear cuz yu Point is Hard~2~See

Hes Rappin Blind cuz his Punches just Seem~2~Miss
I Beat Publicity with my Dick so at least he can Gleam~In~Piss

$ik Slays~Gays so Publicity, might wanna Stay~Away
Or yur Plans(Planes) will Crash like they had a Sudden May~Day

The Only Way yu Touchin Victory is to Flat Out Suck~My~Dick
Cuz Like Sexual Turds Im sayin Esk, Fuck~This~Shit

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iight ill go ahead and drop too then.......

his avy's jack buddy,his feet covered in-sement...
...ha, not even ur sig has subject-verb agreement
check my free agent thread,he wants me to join his whack crew....
...keeps all his money on hand,no wonder even your avy's tryna jack you
this guy rides his crews dick,does that make him an inbreeder?...
...y the fuck should i be scared,this man's an assistant co-leader
NO ELEVATION,so how can this kid resist...
...when even his crew forum's at the bottom of the list
he posted for publicity,at 12:01,thats right...
...so he could say he became a celebrity overnight!

.................^....errrr..kkkk....uppin for votes....

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7 Day Theory

Yu'll Cease to Exist like a Disease that will Dismantle~Yur~Health
So go ahead and Grab yur Dick, i'll just let yu Handle~Yurself
eh..2nd lines palyed...okay openr
This Kid Couldn’t Flow Hard if he Cut His Femoral Artery
Yu must be Typing in Clear cuz yu Point is Hard~2~See
nice punch

Hes Rappin Blind cuz his Punches just Seem~2~Miss
I Beat Publicity with my Dick so at least he can Gleam~In~Piss
eh...okay..

$ik Slays~Gays so Publicity, might wanna Stay~Away
Or yur Plans(Planes) will Crash like they had a Sudden May~Day
eh, weak..
The Only Way yu Touchin Victory is to Flat Out Suck~My~Dick
Cuz Like Sexual Turds Im sayin Esk, Fuck~This~Shit
weak closer...
total-5/10- average...


IP: 3240 794D


iight ill go ahead and drop too then.......

his avy's jack buddy,his feet covered in-sement...
...ha, not even ur sig has subject-verb agreement
lmfao...nice personal....
check my free agent thread,he wants me to join his whack crew....
...keeps all his money on hand,no wonder even your avy's tryna jack you
lmfao...nice personal again...
this guy rides his crews dick,does that make him an inbreeder?...
...y the fuck should i be scared,this man's an assistant co-leader
lmfaoooo...dam...dope 4 a noob...imma noob 2...lol
NO ELEVATION,so how can this kid resist...
...when even his crew forum's at the bottom of the list
OMFGGGGG.....dope....datz it...dope
he posted for publicity,at 12:01,thats right...
...so he could say he became a celebrity overnight!
ILLLLLLL CLOSER
best verse i probably everrrr seeeeeeeeennnnnnn
total- 10/10..........no joke!

vote- publicity......dam son.......sikkkk

^......lol.......................to late to be freestylin...uppin for votes.....

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7 Day Theory

nice battle...uppin for votes.....................

$ik you had a decent verse good punches but your verse lacked off strong hitting punches and personals...u flipped on his name but thats it you didnt say anything directed at him...structure was decent but i dont like the way you space your bars apart...flow was good kinda consistent...

overall:5/10

publicity:you had a good verse and i think this is your first battle so for your first one you used strong punches first time i have seen that from a rook good shyt from you..your personals were hott too and the closer was jus $ik...<<lol>> i wasnt feelin your structure either but i guess its decent...good consistency..and nice flow to it all

overall:7/10

vote: publicity

~!1!~

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iight...lyrically whenever u get your posts up,dont forget to poll......and i should have 20 so i can go poll urs up flow intelligent

wow flow...urs needs 200,might be a while there.....but if it gets mad slept on until i get 200 posts i got ur back man

Ayo siK, wanna battle me? Im tryn to battle somebody, and u wanna go first? im new here yo. I wantz to see wut u go.

Publicity took this 1 i can't beleave Sik the N00b got Riped buy a N-0-0-B oh wait it was Bound 2 happen lol ahahahha yo SiK u Gave up on him man watz wronge no Excuses


Break Down

$iK

Flow 6/10
Rhymez 5/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 5/10
21/40

Publicity

Flow 7/10
Rhymez 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 8/10
27/40

V/Publicity

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uppity up up up up up up..........................

Sik...good attempt at metas and vocab...but, they just were not worded well to hi hard as a punch


your lines did not do much damage to PUB


PUB...good solid verse..i'm not so sure i like the way u present ur lines...it makes ur verse seem deceptively simple..that could hurt you in battles...especially against someone who drops mad multi-syllables

ne way...ur punches were decent...they hit harder than Siks

Vote: Pub