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no d/r, crew or hate votez

5 votes to win

u spit first

....croz i think he saw ur battle vs. me an ran like i did, i ain't neva battlin u gain, well dun

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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha

illest im gunna drop somethin and if u want u can reply or u gettin dq'd

yo

I blow dis NIggas brains out wit my fuckin 22/
Stomp all over dis muthafuckas rhymes, like Im Shaquille O'Neal's Shoe/
Lyrics are so terrible, I think Im gon put dem down as a Felony/
PIgs need mo room in da cells, you da reason they lettin go of R Kelly/
Wanna bang wit da Best, but dis nigga don't even got a scar on his Chest/
Tryin to get a deal Shady, ran into Diddy signin you as da new bands Ness/
New to Rap Battles, so dis nigga just started Sinnin/
MuthaFucka, I've been hott since da Begginnin, Rims are still Spinnin/
Beatin me homie, is like seein a White Kenya Woman/
Reppin dat you Sin wit da Illest, dawg Im gon give you that/
But you took ya name da wrong way, saw ya bendin over Cancer Cats/
Every Muthafucka, White, Black, Skinny and Chubby/
Now you regrettin, cuz now We callin you Magic Johnson's New Buddy/

sorry man, got caught up in sumthin else... I'll spit

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*~*Anytime, anyplace, anyway...*~*

~Last few lines, with much 'beating' left to be done,
And I mean with your right hand, cause you ain't got no girl to give you some.~

Aight here it is... It's an off day today..


You talkin all tough, wantin things to get rough,
That only happens in your room fuckin your boy named Chuck.
Say you been in tha game foreva? Yo rims ain't bling,
Dis cat must be wack, he only sixteen!
Dis game is all familiar, but you're confused wid sumthin else,
I've fucked up catz for years, that list bout to include yoself.
My lyrics are beyond yo comprehension, maybe you can study them in detention,
but you've probably neva been in it, you a good boy an alwayz pay attention.
This shit is crazy, you're verses and flow are crap,
What you tryin ta be? I neva heard of homo who can rap.
These battles always get voted on so slow,
Just like the movie, your world will end 'The Day After Tomorrow'.

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*~*Anytime, anyplace, anyway...*~*

~Last few lines, with much 'beating' left to be done,
And I mean with your right hand, cause you ain't got no girl to give you some.~

This shit is crazy, you're verses and flow are crap,
What you tryin ta be? I neva heard of homo who can rap


haha

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that was quite weak guys. elevate yourselves. vote goes to the first guy,
his overall style was betta. no.2 had a betta punch (the one on the vote above) which made me laugh, but the overall was weaker. thats.my.word

hit up my battle for me http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127213

vote goes to Dacroz......your flow was better along with your structure and your punches you could work on your structure a little bit and try rewording your punches so that they hit harder......pc man

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uppin dis battle

DaCROZ

Flow 6/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 7/10

IllesT

Flow 6/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 8/10

v/ IllesT

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Uppin dis bitch

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*~*Anytime, anyplace, anyway...*~*

~Last few lines, with much 'beating' left to be done,
And I mean with your right hand, cause you ain't got no girl to give you some.~

punches:no one
personals: illest
creativity:dacroz
word play:dacroz

vote dacorz.. weak battle

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quote your own damn lyrics...