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05-27-04, 05:59 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Cheated
IP: 86C3 07B0
Ayo wat am I suppose 2 do I got caught by my dame//
Fuckin her best friend unfortunately I 4got her name// My girl busted in I was lik calm down itz a mistake// Reminding of some shit that could be on Ricky Lake// I was lik come on baby I helpin her put on her dress// Veins poppin out my girlz head she look real stressed// Tried 2 put on my clothes cause I kno she didn't buy it// Shit i betta get out of here cause itz about 2 b a riot// My girl & her best friend started 2 argue loudly & fight// Thought 2 myself glad tat I fucked cause her body is tight// Fightin so much thought i could sneak out without knowin// Halfway out they both looked around & said where u goin// Best friend tryin 2 put herself together 1st wit her skirt// Her nipples still hard I could c them through her shirt// Was in a situation wit 2 girlz shit isn't all good shit isn't fine// Whispered 2 myself look wat I got myself into this tyme// My girl said she was gonna tryin 2 cut my dick off wit a knife// I'm guy so ran as fast as I could lik she threatened my life// Pushed her out the way turnin the locks then open the door// I shouted tatz y yo friend was alot betta than u u dumb whore// Realized I had 2 go back left my keys on the table at her house// Expected she would cool down by down get it & b out// But u kno girlz wildin out is neva in option itz totally essential// She talkin bout I thought u & me really had somethin special// Looked at her lik she dumb then I was lik can i get my keys back// She looked at me 4 a while took a deep breath & was lik fuck tat// I was lik shut the fuck up damn girl u ;re wastin my precious tyme// She started throwin shit all the wall I was glad it wasn't mine// Went upstairs while she goin crazy losin her mind countin 2 ten// Saw her best friend upstairs so I started fuckin her again//
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05-28-04, 12:20 PM | #2 | |||||
(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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IP: B20F 67F7
that was iight in the rhyme sence and the way u put it together but i wasnt feelin the shyt bout people cheatin on dey girls and shyt i aint for all that so i think u might wanna think about wut u rhymin abnout iight kid.............
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05-29-04, 11:25 AM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: ED65 3451
shit was just playful fun I'm a storyteller....................
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05-29-04, 11:29 AM | #4 | |||||||
Ble$$ed With Talent
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IP: 970D 9C87
lol shit was aiight...keep doin you fam...lol you need to work on your structure though like have all the words there not like " i go to store" more like" Got up and carried myself to the store" feel me
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05-31-04, 10:22 AM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 38D9 86FA
uppin............................................. ...........
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05-31-04, 10:42 AM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: 88EF 7D1B
elevate on wordplay otherwise nuttinkt o elvate on xxxx
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