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Old 05-27-04, 05:59 PM   #1
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Ayo wat am I suppose 2 do I got caught by my dame//
Fuckin her best friend unfortunately I 4got her name//
My girl busted in I was lik calm down itz a mistake//
Reminding of some shit that could be on Ricky Lake//
I was lik come on baby I helpin her put on her dress//
Veins poppin out my girlz head she look real stressed//
Tried 2 put on my clothes cause I kno she didn't buy it//
Shit i betta get out of here cause itz about 2 b a riot//


My girl & her best friend started 2 argue loudly & fight//
Thought 2 myself glad tat I fucked cause her body is tight//
Fightin so much thought i could sneak out without knowin//
Halfway out they both looked around & said where u goin//
Best friend tryin 2 put herself together 1st wit her skirt//
Her nipples still hard I could c them through her shirt//
Was in a situation wit 2 girlz shit isn't all good shit isn't fine//
Whispered 2 myself look wat I got myself into this tyme//
My girl said she was gonna tryin 2 cut my dick off wit a knife//
I'm guy so ran as fast as I could lik she threatened my life//
Pushed her out the way turnin the locks then open the door//
I shouted tatz y yo friend was alot betta than u u dumb whore//
Realized I had 2 go back left my keys on the table at her house//
Expected she would cool down by down get it & b out//

But u kno girlz wildin out is neva in option itz totally essential//
She talkin bout I thought u & me really had somethin special//
Looked at her lik she dumb then I was lik can i get my keys back//
She looked at me 4 a while took a deep breath & was lik fuck tat//
I was lik shut the fuck up damn girl u ;re wastin my precious tyme//
She started throwin shit all the wall I was glad it wasn't mine//
Went upstairs while she goin crazy losin her mind countin 2 ten//
Saw her best friend upstairs so I started fuckin her again//
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Old 05-28-04, 12:20 PM   #2
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that was iight in the rhyme sence and the way u put it together but i wasnt feelin the shyt bout people cheatin on dey girls and shyt i aint for all that so i think u might wanna think about wut u rhymin abnout iight kid.............
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Old 05-29-04, 11:25 AM   #3
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shit was just playful fun I'm a storyteller....................
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Old 05-29-04, 11:29 AM   #4
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lol shit was aiight...keep doin you fam...lol you need to work on your structure though like have all the words there not like " i go to store" more like" Got up and carried myself to the store" feel me
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Old 05-31-04, 10:22 AM   #5
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Old 05-31-04, 10:42 AM   #6
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elevate on wordplay otherwise nuttinkt o elvate on xxxx
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