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Old 05-30-04, 05:56 PM   #1
Kre-z
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Kre-z VS Swampsouljah

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aight you know the rules punkbitch, lol, lets go
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Old 05-30-04, 06:26 PM   #2
swampsouljah707
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From: V-town 707 Valley Joe all day
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so you wanna call me a punkbitch huh?

well check it......



this right here's just a rap battle,i aint dissin him//
he dissin me like a lil kid wit no disipline//
dont fuck wit me kid ima cat from the GoldenState//
i'll knock yo bitch ass off the edge the GoldenGate//
now you just missed the island and you hit the ocean//
the impact was so strong leavin yo remains straight floatin//
you wack and weak and im liften you like gravity//
you cant fight the pain im hurtin you bad enough like a cavity.
 
Old 05-31-04, 11:22 AM   #3
Kre-z
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I treat this as my thesis Well written topic/
Broken down into peices
you can tell the style when I rock it
And stop it pop it
put ya shit in the safe and lock it
Used to have respect for the goldenstate
But now i can relate
Ya shit to a man masturbatin( NAASTY)
I spit shit like gold
My lyrics is rich
By writing that rhyme you proved me right
PunkBitch you ain't sick you just aiight
Ya lyrics ain't flowin
Like my friends arm they is broken
If my lyrics were some chronic
then the crowd would be chokin
I shouldn't fuck wit you bitch you ain't hard
Stuff those lyrics up yo ass then give you a discharge
My lyrics are a gun
you ain't got a bullet proof vest
I'm the cleaner
Comin to take out the mess
BIATCH
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Old 05-31-04, 11:27 AM   #4
50hater_killer
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From: ky
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dam I got to go with kre-z with this because his verssu rhymed more and his lyrics where longer, his opener kicked ass and his closure put it all down. so my vote goes to kre-z
check out this battle so it can close plz.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127385
 
Old 05-31-04, 11:39 AM   #5
Kre-z
Flyweight
 
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Yo anymore votes!??????????????????????????????????????
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Old 05-31-04, 03:00 PM   #6
WESTBANKA RADAH
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this right here's just a rap battle,i aint dissin him//
he dissin me like a lil kid wit no disipline//

Swamp, ur piece started out strong, but you lacked a good ending, and addin a couple more bars would have been better.


Kre-Z, the GoldenState twist was tight, ur had dope lyrics, and the flow was smooth. The ending needed a little work on though.
Tight line:
I shouldn't fuck wit you bitch you ain't hard
Stuff those lyrics up yo ass then give you a discharge


Vote = Kre-Z
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Old 05-31-04, 05:27 PM   #7
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Yo vote on this people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 06-01-04, 08:20 AM   #8
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Yo people vote on this shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 06-01-04, 08:31 AM   #9
LyricalMethod
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Kre-z you came harder. way better pucnhes and floe.swampsouljah707 you had no chance of winnin with just those lil lines. you punches were to close together and you didn't really have a decent punches. the discipline one was aight but not enought o win. step it up.Kre-z nice punches, set yous structure up t a lil different next time cuz you shit was all ova the place.return the fava

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Old 06-01-04, 12:36 PM   #10
Kre-z
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Yo vote people, and lyrical you didn't post a link to your battles
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Old 06-02-04, 09:48 AM   #11
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Yo uppin for votes people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 06-02-04, 05:45 PM   #12
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Yo don't sleep on this people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 06-02-04, 10:26 PM   #13
HoPPa
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gots to go wit kre-z, he rhymed more, and it seemed like he was on top of his shit. But no doubt that other boi did good, but my v/ gotz to go to kre=z. Return the favor plz!!! http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127734
Thx im out, peace.
 
Old 06-03-04, 08:49 AM   #14
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Uppin for votes, one more vote to get this closed people
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Old 06-03-04, 09:17 AM   #15
.::N-Sight::.
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this right here's just a rap battle,i aint dissin him//
he dissin me like a lil kid wit no disipline//

^^ wack and too simple

now you just missed the island and you hit the ocean//
the impact was so strong leavin yo remains straight floatin//
you wack and weak and im liften you like gravity//
you cant fight the pain im hurtin you bad enough like a cavity.


^^^^how does gravity lift? this is not well thought out...weak and wack

5/30




I treat this as my thesis Well written topic/
Broken down into peices
you can tell the style when I rock it
And stop it pop it
put ya shit in the safe and lock it
Used to have respect for the goldenstate
But now i can relate
Ya shit to a man masturbatin( NAASTY)
I spit shit like gold

^Not sure I like the way u presented ur bars...but, it flowed well and actually did some damage to the other cat...elevated on the complexity though, metas--wordplay


15/30


Vote: Kre
 
 


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