8 lines max
no c/v d/r etc.
no bullshitin period

Checkin in

Im sorry for not telling you B4 the battle I am da best./
My bullets treat ya body like a jersey cause after it hits they stitch up ya flesh./

I am no longer new to this site cause I bring heat hotter than hell./
I shoot cancer in you and leave ya bald like Sam Cassell./

You the type of outsida that freaks ya self./
I aint got to say shit let the votes speak for themselves./

My verse is weak but you still cant beat it.
Holla Back

The battle is set up where you at or are you pre writing

uppin for vots when or if he type. HOLLA at ya BOY

lil-slip you sould be thrown away to a-skip, your got damn rite ur lyrics are shit/
they wouldn't be seen if they were locked up, stupid wackass little bitch/
im gonna step into this bitch, and give you a heart seizsure/
for being so damn wack at your game in your literature/
i dont reach peace for noobs, i'll sting you like a swarm of bees/
attack you to the damn ground stomp the shitta outa you like a killin spree/
faggots-to slow- to rhyme when he's just a maggot-wid-no-flow/
grab a knife, and slit it across your wind pipe, so i make sure you never grow/

hah hah bitch

IMAO...lil slipa ur punches were very week..u tlk bout ur self the whole time sides about 2 lines..its ok to tlk bout ur self sumtimes..but make sure u get more punches in...very week verse..
outsider...beta...most punches hit harder...i seen a few multis...but they were gr8..but its nice to em in a newb....good form both but vote/outsider

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Outsider, never talk about violence. There are few people who can pull that off, and you aren't one of them. Lil Slippa, you should never underestimate anybody, even though Outsider came out with a weak verse it was still enough to kill you, and thats cause you weren't trying.
v/Outsider, (unfortunately)

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uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

outsider I want a rematch bitch Im gonna whoop yo ass/u had 2 know I was'nt finished/My comp crash so if u accept set up and I'll spit first

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yo outsider took this shit with much harder punches and more creativity..and outsiders closer was definatly hotter. lil slip, you need to work dawg..that line with sam cassell was wack..prolly 75% of the NBA is bald, no creativity there.
vote- outsider... vote on my shit please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126716

upping for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yo imma give dis to outsider because his punches hit harder

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