aight here it is
10 lines
no cheating
no feeding
good luck cause u drop first

Brace ya self DON/
For tha fucked impact of my words/
Out of tha hospital, wit a face full of teflon/
That's how we do it in the suburbs/
Ya get mad n curse and spit till ya words sound like shit/
Oh,I get it, tha con DON tha alias u use/
To hide u soft as a wontan, now u payin' for this abuse/
Under that mask u as pussy as a damn swan/
Go off like a bomb, cause u Italian/
I get you n hit you, like a platoon from Vietnam/

Here take that DON, see if yall like it,but I could have done better.That's why I'm here though.

that wasnt that bad

a mafia soldier comin up against a DON, the mafia boss...
im like miss cleo bitch i read your cards now this is your loss...
your a soldier so then you know my punches like bullets in a attack...
this soldier gona suffer more casualty than the coalition in Iraq...
call yourself the mafia u jus a italian gangster wanabe...
add a 13 to your name cause my 13'th victim is what your gonabe...
your punches lacked humor like water is lacked in beef jerky...
you so bad i jus hope you quit battles and go cold turkey...
I'll kill ur wana be soldier ass and u be old forgotten like beetoven...
and when you get to heaven u soft bitch tell st peter to leave the gate open...
cause i slaughtered 12 other bitches who reminded me of your ass...
i jus penetrated you poisened your mind wit my rhymes like lethal gas...

damn that was off the top of my head im getin better aight lets get some votes thanks pc

Nice DON, way better than mine, like I said I could do better though.Uppin' for votes.

Yo dis battle wuz average nothin spectacular mafia had a decent flow and structure, but da punches,personals and overall affect made me vote for DON

vote-DON stay up though mafia and elevate

hahahahahahahah
mafia why u commin at don wit dat weak shit home boi..elevate mad aight b...

DOn u got this wit better punches flow vocab and structure but overall yur verse was waayyyy betta then this cats but ye D stay up try out for L.T and Mafia elevate b..aight
v/DON

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this was lop sided the first spit was wack don took dis all da way home both of yall keep doin ya thang n don u gettin better stay up
v/don

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1 love live life
2 the fullest

HOLLA @YA GIRL

beezy crew from life to death
n when I die put the colors across my chest

yo my bad i forgot to post this link so vote on dis battle
vote on dis battle

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beezy crew fo life
1 love live life
2 the fullest

HOLLA @YA GIRL

beezy crew from life to death
n when I die put the colors across my chest

battle
my fault i messed up before n stiill didnt post da battle buit check it out n vote honestly

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beezy crew fo life
1 love live life
2 the fullest

HOLLA @YA GIRL

beezy crew from life to death
n when I die put the colors across my chest

aight thanks for the votes and thank beezy and jokah u 2 seen me since the beginnin jokah i thinkin bout makin another crew if l.t gets old or too much aight pc more votes

yo come on lets get some votes on here dont let this battle sleep VOTE

mafia why u commin at don wit dat weak shit home boi..elevate mad aight b...

DOn u got this wit better punches flow vocab and structure but overall yur verse was waayyyy betta then this cats but ye D stay up try out for L.T and Mafia elevate b..aight
v/DON

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aight thanks for the feedback uppin for some more votes dont let this sleep aight pc