yo 10-20 linez max no bull or crew votes must explain votes
check in then spit

ok y oim checkin in i'll spit 1st then you spit you have to check in 1st

who do you think you are biggie smalls/
i called ur girl but ur lucky she didn't answer ma calls/
wrap ur mom in a garbage bag and drop her off waterfalls/
you couldn't even afored basketballs/
thinkin ur cool wit ur fold back hats/
i beat you to death wit chrome baseball bats/
you think that i need weapons to fight/
but i could beat you in the middle of the night/
your face could make me barf/
i could rip off your arms and wear them as a scarf/
you may not be new but your still only a flyweight/
i could cut off your head and use it as fish bait/
you can't rap for crap/
you need a steppin stool to step up, you to short/
you a young cat who can't rap/
claim ya so called gang in LA you get slaped/
I jack yo moms cadilac and put hollow points in the back of yo knee caps/
you can rap but compaired to me you ain't in the same class or on the same page/
So step off stage and in range so i can cut you with this battery operated infected razor blade

check this shit...

D-twizzy commin at it with his wack ass rhymes on the set/
talkin trash bout my momma, a bitch he aint even met/
spittin yo do re me' on da set like ABC/
shut the fuck up nigga, sit down and wait and see/
sayin you gonna rip off my arms and cut off my head/
looks like you da one just got ripped in half, now you layin there dead/
nigga you picked the wrong emcee to fuck wit/
BIGPAPPA make you regret the day you first saw yo mammas clit/
step in da battle ring and take an upper cut like suggar ray/
flat on da mat is where yo broke ass is bout to lay/

D-twizzy actin all fluffy and frizzy on da text/
this faggot aint got shit on me, yo death is da crime im committin next/
BIGPAPPA ripps D-twizzy by 1 million times illa/
step da fuck back son, you messin wit da real lyrical rhyme killa/
ill fuck you up and steal all yo fake ass bling/
leave yo ass so bloody you would wish you was rodney king/
bitch imma murda you wit my rhyme killin verse/
soon you be leavin in a body bag stuffed inside a herse/
fuckin little pansy just didnt see it commin/
should have stayed home and asked yo momma for some luvin/

BIGPAPPA76

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yo people are viewin this shit but no votes.... UPPIN DIS SHIT YALL!

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who do you think you are biggie smalls/
i called ur girl but ur lucky she didn't answer ma calls/
wrap ur mom in a garbage bag and drop her off waterfalls/
you couldn't even afored basketballs/
thinkin ur cool wit ur fold back hats/
i beat you to death wit chrome baseball bats/

^immature disses cost you this battle...be more complex and creative with your punche dawg...stay up

D-twizzy commin at it with his wack ass rhymes on the set/
talkin trash bout my momma, a bitch he aint even met/
spittin yo do re me' on da set like ABC/
shut the fuck up nigga, sit down and wait and see/
sayin you gonna rip off my arms and cut off my head/

^This is borderline feeding...a NO NO...just focus on your own punches at him...you came harder, but still need to be more creative with your metas and wordplay.


Vote: BIG...harder verse

yo uppin dis shit!!! come on people stop sleepin!!

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this shit is turning into a sleeper, i smoked this fool, where da votes at?

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ok yall t his is rediculous.... fuck i hate when people view this shit and dont vote. UPPIN FOR FUCKIN VOTES PEOPLE!!!! DAMN!!!!!!!

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I have to give this one to Big pappa he had a better flow and he had more punches in this one so my vote goes to BIG

still uppin for votes.............................

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big took this wit better flow, structure, and punches. d-twizzy u had basic lines and it was wack. u need work. elevate man. big u got some potential keep battling. and elevate your wordplay. vote - big

hit up this battle since i hit up yours.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128355

big-Nice spit........You came good with the punch lines some was pretty aight
....you had everything uncluding similies work on diffinitly the
metaphores..Balacance was ok.....just work on a few things and ya will be there......

D-Aight but not that good....Work on something, structure was ok
but work on some thing.....Multies Definitly need more also the similies and metaphores
work..Personals didnt have...But keep elevatin and workin on tons of things
v/big,,came harder

return the fav please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356

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yo uppin dis shit, dont sleep on me now...........

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