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iight chekin in

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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY..STING LIKE A BEE..YOUR HANDS CANT HIT..WHAT YA EYEZ CANT SEE!!!!!
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I AM THE CHAMP!!!!

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I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT

G'L

The kid SmArTzZ gonna tear tru insight,heat source leaving u wit lack of air liked i smashed ya wind pipe,
,dispite hiz dum reactions wen hiz raps ignite,im not polite,i juss dun undersrtand i thingz u write,
leaving u diagnosed wit a fatal disease,while u down on ya kneez,no motions u freeze,
,lata on u diceased,cuz it aint easy,and im not gonna let u get a freeb,
like everybody only kno 1 letta wen u rap all u see iz frequent z's,,u aint beatin me
left blueprints to show how i waz gonna leave u demolished,beating thiz rookie let me see u acomplish,
but u aint u got thingz a total twist,stab u leaving my knife full of hemorrhagic cyst,
and my rapz are tight like clenched fist,leaving u ripped tragicly,tryna battle me.
wit my cannible rhymez dat'll eat up ya inside and leave u wit zero capacity,
now hiz skin tone the color of th eletters on my ps2,hit u wit bana clipz like im holding a zoo
ur naim insight i see y u like blind spits,wit weak lines u rhyme wit..(ran outta time )

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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY..STING LIKE A BEE..YOUR HANDS CANT HIT..WHAT YA EYEZ CANT SEE!!!!!
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I AM THE CHAMP!!!!

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I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT

itz not over 16 barz itz juss dat in m wordpad it made it look like dat

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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY..STING LIKE A BEE..YOUR HANDS CANT HIT..WHAT YA EYEZ CANT SEE!!!!!
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I AM THE CHAMP!!!!

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I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT

bananna*

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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY..STING LIKE A BEE..YOUR HANDS CANT HIT..WHAT YA EYEZ CANT SEE!!!!!
<img src="http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/8295/jonezsig.jpg" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" />
I AM THE CHAMP!!!!

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I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT

This kid ain't got much smarts battlin' me..I'll mame this cat-
Toss his head to give him a fast start..still can't outpace me on track-
I'll swing at your head with an ax..str8 decapitate this spaz-
Shove your brain up ur rectum..u still won't be a smart ass-
You got all the smarts in your SIG..get off Einstein's penis-
Even if you jacked him off..u still wouldn't have a stroke of genius-
I'll have you running away like SONIC in ur avy when my shells hit-
Kid must be crazy..claimin' to be smart but can't even spell it-
8th disciples think they GOD's chosen..but y'all missin' four-heads-
Like I punched ya faces in..face it, ya style couldn't be more dead-
Structure is the wackest part of ur verse..wordplay in ur rhymes is missin-
This kid thinks he's Suga Ray...nah, thats just sugar lines you spittin-


Listen, how u beatin me with fucked up grammar..ur words stammer-
I got this in the bag like Santa..put the pump to this bum like Hammer-


Fuck outta huuuuuuuuuuuuur!

lol good battle iight uppin

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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY..STING LIKE A BEE..YOUR HANDS CANT HIT..WHAT YA EYEZ CANT SEE!!!!!
<img src="http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/8295/jonezsig.jpg" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" />
I AM THE CHAMP!!!!

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I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT

Aight Honest Vote Goes To N-sight For Better Punches,flow And Structure
I Couldnt Understand The Other Guys Structure So The Vote Goes To N-sight !!! Peace

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Im gonna have to say...N sight won this battle......he had better structure,better wordplay and flow....smartzz u came pretty hard but not good enough u had some ok punches u werer kinda giving urself props in the beginning of the rhyme ...not gonna win a battle by giviing urself props ya know wat i mean???yabut good battle guys...but i think this line was pretty hot^^^^^


8th disciples think they GOD's chosen..but y'all missin' four-heads-
Like I punched ya faces in..face it, ya style couldn't be more dead-

Vote-N-Sight

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this goes to n-sight

smartz-good flow
need to work on structure though
u hzd a few multies in there
ur punches were ok but a bit played
u need to up your creativity and wordplay and hit wit sum personals coz u had none

n-sight-gud flow/structure..multies were there
punches were original......
You got all the smarts in your SIG..get off Einstein's penis-
Even if you jacked him off..u still wouldn't have a stroke of genius-
^^^that verse woz ya best...made me laugh^^^
u also had no personals
but u jnew u had enough isuppose

n-sight takes this coz he came harder.

vote-n sight

BREAKDOWN

Smartzz: ok this was a pretty weak drop in my opinion. ure flow was aight but a little choppy in places cuz ure structure was weak, all ure lines were stretched like fuck. punches, u didn't really have any hard hittin ones and some of the concepts were played. u lacked in creativity, ure wordplay was not that gud, but ure still elevatin ure game so it was an aight drop. OVERALL 6/10

N-Sight: nice drop. u beat this guy easily, u had a tight flow, ure verse flowed nice from start to finish, u had a gud structure everything was kept the same length. u had some nice punches in ure verse, some were pretty weak but mainy they were hittin hard. personals were in there, some were pretty funny. u had sum nice wordplay in places but sum basic in other places. u had sum creativity in a couple of lines...overall nice drop. OVERALL 7.5/10

V/ - N-Sight

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yea this one goes to N-SIGHT he had better fl0w, more pucnhes and had allot more personels in his lyrics so my vote goes to N-sight peace. oh yea hit up on this plz thnx.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128248