Yo listen up these is the rules:
No prewritten
5-12 lines
No copyrighted dope... or uncopyrighted

Good luck fool

yo dude, start already, wat...r u takin a nappy nappy?\

well if not, ur gonne be gone for good,\

or live ur life in shame, ofr tryin to win, what r u?? insane?\

ill be waiting for your response while ya try to aford a phone to call\

1800-the battle you just lost it\

throw back on ya dress now couse everyone know's you cross fit\

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uhhh dude?!?

Yo ... this nigga goin down. Back to the gospel ...were he belongs...

yo i never even heard this nigga rap//
But as he laid his shit
I knew he was dancing on his mother`s lap//
yo listen ameteur get some better rhymes//
Leave to perspect over those old times//
Raper`s lyrics are so wak he wrote them under a glass of GIN//
Man you werent so drunk to have kids with ya cousin

ur lines r sad excuses for rap.\
(they aint even a bad enflounce like crack\
and by crack I do mean cocaine \
the stuff u should obtaine\
to get a life\
and if u lucky a wife\
but she need to take a truck load of that stuff\
to even think ur man enough\
to consider sucking ur dick\
or to even lick ur neck \
man u must be wack \
if u think ud find someone like that\
to actually get sum rap skills u will need all the worlds luck\
jes bounce we all kno all u want is a guy to fuck.....\\




(ooohhh)

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uhhh dude?!?

WHOAAA THIS KID LOST AND HE SPIT 2 VERSE'S


Break Down

$pAwn of $atan

Flow 4/10
Rhymes 2/10
Punches2/10
Structure 3/10
11/40

Gr|m Reaper

Flow 1/10
Rhymes 1/10
Punches 2/10
structure 0/10
4/40

V/$pAwn of $atan

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Im not bad shit....n y ya missin me bastids
Leave nigga's in da past like history-classes

Man this was the weakest battle ever but spawn won this, both was so weak
my gran would beat you both. Spawn won this coz hes shit seemed to resemble
a very basic verse...

Vote~Spawn

wow weaker than my battle I give this to $pAwn oF $AtAn because
he had slightly better punches and not really special tho.............
but you get my vote bizatch

do a honest vote on my shit the links in my signature

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This battle fuckin sucks spawn u got this even though u lacked everything u need to put down in a freestyle the other dude just speaks for himself

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"Only The Strong Survive"

"It's funny how a few bucks can...
Get you put under a white sheet like you in the Klu Kulx Klan"

"Sex, murder, and mayhem, romance for the street Man, and I tell ya, it'll be the best seller"

"It is foolish and wrong to mourn the men who died Rather we should thank God that such men lived"

"Bravery is being the only one who knows you're afraid"

"Forgive your enemies, but dont forget them. Nothing annoys them so much"

I already posted my shit but man go to a better battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129210

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"Only The Strong Survive"

"It's funny how a few bucks can...
Get you put under a white sheet like you in the Klu Kulx Klan"

"Sex, murder, and mayhem, romance for the street Man, and I tell ya, it'll be the best seller"

"It is foolish and wrong to mourn the men who died Rather we should thank God that such men lived"

"Bravery is being the only one who knows you're afraid"

"Forgive your enemies, but dont forget them. Nothing annoys them so much"