10-16 lines max.
No crew, hate, d/r votes.
No recycling.
No biting.
Blind Spit.

We both have 2 hours from now.

G/L.

Checkin' in...

Check in so I can make sure you're not a no-show.

Checkin in ha ha, 2 hours what the fuck, what you watch Bet and get out ya russel simmons book and go over some things like whats a punchline- niggih it dont take that fuckin long before I spit, so guess now its crunch time- Now I'm telling you this battle is over now so listen cause I'm only saying it one time-

im an 'earthquake' send 'shocks-through-ya-larva', beat me? you got a better chance of provin the Lox-went-to-Harvard, 'menace detective' a collaboration of Pac-n-Mcguiver/

leave ya 'patched-up' like attackin-a-pirate, you on a 'crash-course' cuz i sell crack-to-da-pilot, weigh-in-my-thesis yo throat ceases to release an increase of whats needed to breath/

basically ya left 'speechless', found in a sanbox by kids playin-at-recess, start prayin-to-Jesus the result of my vocabulary-clearance wit words im marvelously-brilliant/

and the sawed-shotties-appearance is enough to give this bitch an 'out-of-body-experience' called the 'rap Stalin' cuz im buryin-millions, 'emotionally-unfit' cuz ya carryin-feelings/

im 'Kanye Blessed' but it 'all falls down' for you 'inherit-da-ceiling', never off my game like Kobe gettin senteced-a-hearing, versus me you get death, yo 'penance-fo-being'/

I put 2 hours coz I got other battles on the Original RB dumbass...

Ima post sometime soon...

Well hurry the fuck up so this one dont fade "dumbass", I got like 5 other ones also, that'wn mean shit what you saying. lets go.

Every 3 lines(short lines) = 1 bar. And since it's 16 lines(long lines), I get 8 bars. Can't change it, it's my structure.

Aight check it...

U represent wackness, coz that's what u are
why should i spit?...
...when u'll get merked by ur own bars!
No pulse, coz ima heart attack to ur health
he has no punches...
...so the bitch actually propped himself!
No need to state the winner, he already knows
coz even he said...
...that his death is "very close"!*
Ur an earthquake, but im what stops it
ur spits are so played...
...people come in and shop it!
Merken u, with my rhymes flowin around u
battlin' isn't enough?...
bitch ur lucky i dont fuckin' drown u!
I'm throwin punches, but u missed with bricks
u think this is wack?...
...ever actually read ur own spits?!
He's so wack, he posted a thread startin a crew
and till now...
...he didn't even get 1 view!
That's it, dont u know the game's over
can sumone get rid of him?...
...just take the "Dirt Off My Shoulder"!

* - Look above his status. It's written "very close".

aight Uppin. lets go the favor will be returned to those who drop an honest vote.

Hm@Lethal Kahn, who are you on the regular rapbattles? Ha. Because everyone uses that damn structure. But anywho, Lethal Kahn took this because you came harder and had better punches and Mc's Reaper thinks multis when battles for some odd reason and his structure was horrible. And MC, you praised yourself. Dont do that. Neither of you came dope, but Lethal obviously took this.

Vote-Lethal



That basically did it for me.

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Im dope. You're not.

Man seriously lets get some votes in here UPpiN...

reaper- your sturcher was hard to follow man and i wasnt feelin the style at all oversall you had no personals either you had punches but that was it period man

leathal- sturcher was good but flow was ehhhh but you made an attemp at a personal and that was y you got this i feel ok

v/ Khan

retun the favor links in the sig

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reaper- your sturcher was hard to follow man and i wasnt feelin the style at all oversall you had no personals either you had punches but that was it period man

leathal- sturcher was good but flow was ehhhh but you made an attemp at a personal and that was y you got this i feel ok

v/ Khan

retun the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127447
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126824

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Lethal Kahn Ripped the Spot light his structure was tight u need more Complex Rhymes and Punches but u did good

Mc's Reaper was ok but ur Verse Was Nursery rhymes so its not as good i think Lethal Kahn Came away wit it

Break Down

Mc's Reaper

Flow 5/10
Rhymes3/10
Punches 6/10
Structure 5/10
19/40

Lethal Kahn

Flow 7/10
Rhymes 8/10
Punches 7/10
Structure 7/10
29/40

V/Lethal Kahn

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Im not bad shit....n y ya missin me bastids
Leave nigga's in da past like history-classes

Aight thx for the votes...

I ripped this lil' hoe...

Uppin'