This fag got a Brave-Mouth, but tha only thing I hear from this Individual is Gay-Shouts//
You gettin ASS in tha PARK aint what I mean when I say ya gonna get "LAID-OUT"//
We on two Different-Levels, watch me Spank-Him-N-Leave-His-Bars-Dead//
I got this Bitch-Disheveled cuz like a PUSSY that STINK I'm Deflatin-this-HARD-HEAD//
If you was tha manager at tha ATKINS-FACTORY ya still wouldn't have FAT-LINES//(Think about it)
I'll Smash-Ya-Casually n from here on out I'ma HAUNT ya foreva like PAST-CRIMES//
This fake thug get no Respect-On-Six, man I'll straight up piss on ya Tape-Demo//
Some one need to Check-This-Bitch cuz he couldn't take these Punches if he had a CHIN like JAY-LENO//

*Finish Him*

I Infect-Wit-Flem Disect-Wit-Pens create n Impress-Wit-Gems, n if ya SEE yaself beatin me ya need to Correct-Ya-LENS//
Smith be in the Bed-Wit-Menz tryin to Inspect-Thier-Endz, I aint a homophobic but I'll still Deck-Ya-Frendz//

Pre-written? Tsk. Ill drop in a few. And Lol@dash marks.

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pre-written, get the fuck outta here wit all that bullshit niggih. I'm sorry you cantype as fast as I do but its not my problem, you just post and dont feed, talking bout my shit is pre-written.

I asked 4 someone dope..and I got MC, so why not..
Cause da closes he'll get to shining? Is his signature's bright spot
Orange!? Kids feminine and wack..u know who Im better than
Jackson avy? O,like Michaels Park..his punches will Never-Land
Coming half-assed to mimic ya verse..but why bother
It dont take much to get rid of MR......I, just avoid the doctors
Ha, u probably dont get that..cause dis weaks worst
And he's even self-contradictory..Reap, u do text.....
......so u NEED WORD'S...
Blah, you're no competition..and you've reached worthless
And since Reap thought he was the topic........






.......I just defeated the purpose.

-Word.

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yo im not voting but MC reaper your shit was probably pre-written.. look at the times.. you made the thread then 4 mins later you spit ten lines... i know you probably can't free up something like that in 4 mins considering all the typing you would have to do... but if it wasnt it was alright..

Ayo man, I took over three business courses, and 4 classes plus this one im computers and I type over 60 words per minute, and you telling me I cant drop somein 4 mins get outta here man..thats just what niggihs be talking about, non-believers.

UPPIN for votes, the fav. will be returned.

I got faith in MCs Reaper cuz the point of a flow is to flow! What the fuck...people trip if your shit takes too long and then trip if your shit dont take long enough and that's bullshit. MC big ups to you cuz the way we do it around my way is straight off the top and that shit takes about 4 min.

Flow - Reaper had better structure--flowed better

Punches - Wordsmith was good...reaper was better basically.

Personals - Wordsmith had more. MC you need to make sure you hit a lot of personals or people are always gonna say your shit is written.

Vocab - Even

Originality - "I got this Bitch-Disheveled cuz like a PUSSY that STINK I'm Deflatin-this-HARD-HEAD"...that was tight.

v/MC

LoL. Alright, some umm..veteran votes. AKA, people who know how to.

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This was a pretty decent battle.... Both of you came with a few funny punchlines in this- for example

This fag got a Brave-Mouth, but tha only thing I hear from this Individual is Gay-Shouts//
You gettin ASS in tha PARK aint what I mean when I say ya gonna get "LAID-OUT"//
We on two Different-Levels, watch me Spank-Him-N-Leave-His-Bars-Dead//
I got this Bitch-Disheveled cuz like a PUSSY that STINK I'm Deflatin-this-HARD-HEAD//
and Your Closer was pretty funny too.....

and for Wordsmith...
Orange!? Kids feminine and wack..u know who Im better than
Jackson avy? O,like Michaels Park..his punches will Never-Land
Blah, you're no competition..and you've reached worthless
And since Reap thought he was the topic........
.......I just defeated the purpose.-

I found the "avoid the doctors" line really well thought out- creative also... I think all in all Wordsmiths Verse was much better structured in that his bars didn't stretch so much- I think you both had good punchlines but Wordsmiths were better, he had a better setup and punch combo in most circumstances- using less words with more descriptive value. Good Job from both of you -I could see others on this site voting either way but Ima have to go With Wordsmith on this one. Please return the favor with an Honest Vote..... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356

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this was a good battle but i liked Word smiths punches and personals

so

v/word smith

Up # 2, how many am I allowed to have? Im sorry if I violated something.

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mc-nIce spit close battle..everything was good had
everything in the english catagory..juss work on hittin hard
punches and balance

Word-You had 4 lines that killed it...The michael jackson and
the last line..whooo...You get my vote becuz of those
really juss work on a alot of things

return the favor please for me being nice to you http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356

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Aight aight yeah
Ayo my mans is real wit it
Reap had the
Structure
Flow
Personal not all the way
Rhyme scheme
and the Meta's and thats all I'm looking for.
v/MC