damn ketch jpoll was right u didnt have any real punches.ur verse needs a lota work it sounded like notebook to me no persoanls really and no hard punches flow and structure could use a lota work too but no hate jus keep elevatin.jpoll i liked the thing bout the ring good one and nice punches and personals. good strucuture it was complex but easy to read. flow could use a lil work but good verse solid punches.
JPoll-yo punches were hard, descent and they landed..yo structure confused
me a little..yo personals was good 'n' shit...but mostly yo punches took it...
kEtCh~22-yo punches were hard but not as hard as JPoll's...yo structure was good 'n' shit..yo punches could've been a little harder & you would've tookin' this battle...