the rules are:

10-20 lines
no feeding
no biting
no d/r votes
no h8 votes
no crew votes


good luck...

checking in. . .those rules sound safe to me. i'll be ready 10-15 mins ok?

good luck.

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ok..........

so this guy is called big gaz, he is also known as a weak ass mc//
ill tell you this to a tolerable degree, your rhymes r wack//
every time he comes out of his house he has a panic attack//
because he though he could rap, for god sake this guy thought he was tupac//
be like j-kwon, 1 here comes the 2 to the 3 to the 4//
when you get lyrically murderd your death i will be responsible for//
people say im as good as nutorious b.i.g//
the next person you shag will get h.i.v//
this guy is only about 12 years old//
if u wanted to be a garbage man youll never be enrolled//
im here pumpin shots into your chest//
now its the end of this battle, your comin out second best//

ok nice verse mate. here is mine. . .

U cant ‘shyne’, I got this battle on ‘lockdown’
Victories mine with my verbal glock, clown
U from Manchester, but u never get ‘coronation’*
U the only one feeling urself, like masturbation
Dude’s called plus two, how bout minus seven?
Ur records gone flat, cud say its unleaven
It’s embarrassing, newbies beating flyweights
But you not built for hip-hop, u shud try skate
Looks like u from the ‘city’ I can tell u not ‘united’
But my ‘arsenal’ got mothefuckers frightened*
Unbeatable, the noose just got tightened
Face it, bitch, your whole career is a flop
And I’m pulling ur card over like I was a cop
U an embarrassment to English hip hop u fucking ‘rascal’*
I’m like ‘Michael Moore’, smashing your ‘bones and skulls’

*Notes for Americans (sorry to sound patronising but both of us are english, i wanted to explain these in case they over ur head):
Coronation Street is a soap opera set in Manchester
Manchester has 2 football clubs, United (the better one) and City (the worse one)
Arsenal is another football team who won the league unbeaten
Dizzee Rascal is the most well known English MC but nobody over here likes him.

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ok dat was nice u part of any crews?? uppinnnnnnn.........

yeh im part of the mafioso crew. they aint gonna vote tho its aite.

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VOTE ON Blaziin Aziin vs CaliCollegeGurl...return the favor!

Big Gaz ripped that verse apart with personal jabs, good vocab, and y'all both had a great flow. Nice battle. I think y'all should re-match regardless of who wins and just elevate this ish. But, yeah, Gaz gets it. Holla.

v/Gaz

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ok ok, this was an ok battle but ima have to go with gaz. to me he flowed and rhymed better, he had one or two better punches than his opponent so therefore..........


v/big gaz

2-0 to gaz. . .uppin for more votes. . . . . . . . .

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uppin for votes

Oh thank god thats over wit to be honest none of ur verses impressed me and to be honest a lot of work is to be needed to improve on this big won on the structure kept it real basic plus urs was a bit choppy. personals were plus's as bigs werent really aimed well, punches big got but neither was creative multies nope none again Plus looked like he put more effort into his rhyme and both had a line that didnt rhyme but plus's was at the beginning and managed to pick up from there whereas big's was near the end and kinda fell off on bits so ima give this to Plustwo

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R.I.P OMB

To Be Honest...I Don't Know Why I Bothered

2-1 upppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.................... ..

rtf in ma sig............................\/ vs killah bwoy or vs kryo

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aight dog, i know thats ur opinion and all but i disagree. i felt i killed him on personals seeing as tho i dissed him cuz of his record (1-8) and sum manchester type shit in there. none of his shit was personal. and the way i pronounce it, sorta like ras-kul it did rhyme but i cant convey that on internet.

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