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View Poll Results: Who Merked Who?
PLOTT 1 16.67%
Immortal_Souljah04 5 83.33%
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Old 06-12-04, 09:28 PM   #1
For$akeN
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PLOTT .VS. Immortal_Souljah04

IP: 5043 32F4

rules are:
40 mins to spit
changed to 40 mins to spit no one needs to go first
no hate/d.r votes
no unexplained votes
no recycling
no biting
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Old 06-12-04, 09:46 PM   #2
For$akeN
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lil keystyle right here:


are you plotting to beat me??? whoa another shitty scheme//
i'll strike you out more times than a whole baseball team//

challenge me well guess what homie I really do accept//
your wackness comes overnight more times than I slept//

digging holes for a living that why you can't elevate//
my kills be spinning around you like a figure eight//
(I have 8 wins)

closest to number one is to you is being born in February//
your rhymes are all dead like bodies in a cemetery//
(february is the second month of the year)

you winning is like saying L.A wasn't lucky in game 3//
kill you in a river and say this is the second red sea//
(Kobe got a lucky shot in Game 3...GO PISTONS!!!)
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Old 06-12-04, 09:53 PM   #3
PLOTT
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Souljah huh? never heard of U.
So I'll fuck*n murder U: then refer 2 U in PAST TENSES-
Putting ends 2 ya words like full-stops end sentences.//
Mortally wounding this pawn: who flows like CESS POOLS
Get schooled- coz ya couldn't -raise the bar- on a bench fool!//
Coz Soul ya slow as snails- but thats not what I refer 2:
When I say- I leave ya guts fulla slugs like FRENCH FOOD.//
I wouldnt wipe my ass with ya scripts- coz they aint worht sh*t-
Ya styles the worstest- ya verse are like accidents on purpose.//
So go stash ya lies dog >backspace< & DASH 4 ya life_ _ _ _
Coz ya rhyme-book gets riddled by holes- with 1 blast of Plotts rhymes...
So ya see ya HOLED life flash b4 ya eyes b4 ya die.//
 
Old 06-12-04, 10:50 PM   #4
For$akeN
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uppin 4 votes we both already spit don't sleep on this battle yo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 06-12-04, 11:08 PM   #5
Metaskriptz
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IS-You took this..Structure was decent
but not very balance and plus you had the
Vocab..Metaphores weas there but Need work on
those Keep elevatin

PLott-Yours was aight...But your vocab
and spelling was shitty..and similies was
there and stuff and also metphores but
your structure was a little off to..

v/IS
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Old 06-12-04, 11:12 PM   #6
PLOTT
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vocab & spelling was shitty?Whut!
I didnt make any mistakes bitch- i read ur battle u suk.
 
Old 06-12-04, 11:36 PM   #7
For$akeN
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uppin 4 votes don't sleep on dis shit aights!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!
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Old 06-13-04, 03:17 AM   #8
Ravage
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From: Washinton
good battle

IP: 981C FD80

this was a touf decision, and me not liken the disciples thought it would make me vote for you plott, but check it..
Mortally wounding this pawn: who flows like CESS POOLS
Get schooled- coz ya couldn't -raise the bar- on a bench fool!//
was a sick ass bar, but i didnt like much of the other shit you said, while immortal soul slapped you around while makin him seemin bigger.. good battle still not tryin to hate...
vote soul
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Old 06-13-04, 04:18 PM   #9
*The~Star*
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From: STL:314
IP: C241 FE41

Vote=Immortal

This battle wasn't that great.I wasn't feeling IS spit a lil more.Plott I wasn't really connecting ya stuff.

you winning is like saying L.A wasn't lucky in game 3//
kill you in a river and say this is the second red sea//
(Kobe got a lucky shot in Game 3...GO PISTONS!!!)

^Got incorrect info.The lucky shot was from game 2
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Old 06-13-04, 06:50 PM   #10
For$akeN
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oh ya wrong game 68-88 that was game 3 my mistake whatever
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Old 06-13-04, 09:51 PM   #11
For$akeN
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uppin 4 some muthafuckin votes up in dis bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
leave links also if that makes you happy
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Old 06-14-04, 06:54 PM   #12
For$akeN
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uppin for votes.......................dont sleep on dis shit right here..............
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Old 06-15-04, 08:29 PM   #13
For$akeN
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up-up-up-uppin 4 votes dont sleep on this remember leave links and i'll get back to it!

~Im Out~
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Old 06-15-04, 09:42 PM   #14
LaTiNKiTTeN
...i'm da nicest...
 
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From: east coast
IP: 322E 3373

are you plotting to beat me??? whoa another shitty scheme//
i'll strike you out more times than a whole baseball team//
I DONT LIKE THIS AT ALL.......THIS CONCEPT IS PLAYED

challenge me well guess what homie I really do accept//
your wackness comes overnight more times than I slept//
HMMM.....WASNT FEELIN THIS

digging holes for a living that why you can't elevate//
my kills be spinning around you like a figure eight//
(I have 8 wins)
DONT LIKE THIS

closest to number one is to you is being born in February//
your rhymes are all dead like bodies in a cemetery//
(february is the second month of the year)
I DIDNT LIKE THE FEBRUARY LINE.......U MADE IT TOO COMPLICATED N IT WASNT HARD HITTING

you winning is like saying L.A wasn't lucky in game 3//
kill you in a river and say this is the second red sea//
(Kobe got a lucky shot in Game 3...GO PISTONS!!!)
RED SEA LINE WAS UR BEAT LINE I THINK.......BUT IF I COMPARE UR BEST LINE TO THE OTHER KID'S BEST LINE.....I WAS FEELIN THE SLUG LINE MORE......PLUS HE HAD THE RAISE THE BAR LINE WHICH IS KINDA PLAYED BUT UR BASEBALL LINE IS KINDA PLAYED......SO HE WINS BY A LITTLE CUZ OF THE SLUGS LINE....................IT WAS REALLY CLOSE



Souljah huh? never heard of U.
So I'll fuck*n murder U: then refer 2 U in PAST TENSES-
Putting ends 2 ya words like full-stops end sentences.//
WEAK
Mortally wounding this pawn: who flows like CESS POOLS
Get schooled- coz ya couldn't -raise the bar- on a bench fool!//
I LIKE THIS,BUT I MAY HAVE SEEN THIS CONCEPT BEFORE..OK PUNCH
Coz Soul ya slow as snails- but thats not what I refer 2:
When I say- I leave ya guts fulla slugs like FRENCH FOOD.//
LOL STRAIGHT PUNCH......
I wouldnt wipe my ass with ya scripts- coz they aint worht sh*t-
Ya styles the worstest- ya verse are like accidents on purpose.//
WORSTEST IS NOT A WORD...U SHOULD'VE SAID STYLES IS WORTHLESS....BUT YEA.....THAT PUNCH AINT HARD HITTING
So go stash ya lies dog >backspace< & DASH 4 ya life_ _ _ _
Coz ya rhyme-book gets riddled by holes- with 1 blast of Plotts rhymes...
So ya see ya HOLED life flash b4 ya eyes b4 ya die.//
THE END FELL OFF,THAT 2ND LINE IN THERE THREW OFF THE WHOLE BAR........DONT MAKE 3 LINE BARS.....U SHOULD'VE JUST REMOVED THE 2ND LINE ALTOGETHER.......CLOSING IS KIND OF A WEAK ATTEMPT AT WORDPLAY WITH THE "HOLED" LIFE.......BUT U HAD 2 OK PUNCHES....SLUGS LINE WAS THE BEST IN THIS BATTLE
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Old 06-15-04, 09:53 PM   #15
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plott you need to work on better punches and metaphores... immortal your shits aight got a nice rhyme scheme but your punches could elevate some... immortal gets my vote
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