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Old 06-13-04, 02:48 PM   #1
God Emcee
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Arrow newb first freestyle

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aye yo


my first freestyle but it aint my last/
champ belt round my waiste n ill spank dat ass/
Despite crime my past was tuff/
I had to scruff/was too cute to work inna check outline/
so i stayed at home baggin up n as soon as people got they checks they came to check out mine/ n I was workin the checkout line/ i was servin dem nickels n dimes/kill hatas dat try 2 bite my rhymes/
I fill da hatas who try 2 bite my lines/(eat n full)
juss call me wolverine the way I pop x man/
Ah rookie on here but I been ah vet man/
Tha best in my army n dass the truth/
N why u tryin to play guard when u scared to shoot/
I cook chumps like my name was George Forman/
leave u stretched on the ground like wakin up in the mornin/
Makem take dirt naps so wha the fuck u pickin(afro picks)/
turn gangstas to pussies dass why they tuck they dickin/
God Emcee the boy dass known to pull it/
Not tha movie but have u playin dodge ball wit bullets/
U can call me the newb but Im the new icon/
cuz i can kill wit da rhymes n add ah few icons/
Hate all ya want I dont give ah fuck/
u try 2 copy my shit u git ya fingas stuck/
God Emcee I buss like Greyhound/
Leave u scared sweatin like Michael Jackson at a playground/

Mothafucka
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Old 06-13-04, 05:42 PM   #2
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I think if I took a dump on this, it would actually be better...
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Old 06-13-04, 05:58 PM   #3
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lol i wasnt feelin it all that much but i wouldnt dis it as hard as split just keep elevatin iight good luck man...
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Old 06-13-04, 08:27 PM   #4
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no feeling either and you can't freestyle over a computer dog.........
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Old 06-13-04, 10:53 PM   #5
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^your sig is so witty...
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Old 06-13-04, 11:08 PM   #6
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yeah wasnt feelin it u need a betta structure
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