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bigpimpn' 0 0%
Street Legend 5 100.00%
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Old 06-15-04, 03:16 AM   #1
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From: Bmore, Murderland
Angry Street Legend vs. Bigpimpn`

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yo you spit first. And since you tryna get in the crew if you win you in if not go somewhere else.
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Old 06-15-04, 03:34 AM   #2
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So u want me to rhyme to get in your crew//
oh muthafucka i got news for you//
Street ;egend yea thats false//
your as stree as Joe Walsh//
Niggas like you don't fuck with me//
Cause i won't take any of your S.H.I.T//
i've looked at your style its so fuckin weird//
to faggots like u i'm the most feared//
oh and why'd u face a newb, u like it easy//
or is it cause your lyrics are cheap and cheesy//
u say your legend is it true//
what you gonna say when people ask//
Man why'd u let that newbie out rap u//
 
Old 06-15-04, 03:57 AM   #3
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From: Bmore, Murderland
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Yo (lol) i can top that shit when im tired.

My ill scriptures cause lyrical destruction//
Im hard you weak what I look like fearin you suckas//
The shit I spit leave Pimpn body scorn and clothes torn//
His minds is confused wonderin what type of shit that im on//
People like big get encouraged to spit random words//
Shit be funny when they dont understand their own verbs//
Im a lyricist bitch, so I stay with new bars//
You a newbie you gotta fix up ya old rhymes like they do with used cars//
I dont kno if you noticed but im givin it to you//
Deadly and my final decision is, you not getting in the crew//(Deadly Rhymes is the crew leader)
Bitch (lol)
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Old 06-15-04, 03:24 PM   #4
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From: Bmore, Murderland
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uppin
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Old 06-15-04, 03:26 PM   #5
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From: colorado,Ft.Morgan
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my vote goes to street if i ever had to say someone was wack id have to say bigpimpin
man ur verse and vocab and structure was all to basic i aint even gonna tell u to elevate and street dawg that was some ill shit keep it up
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Old 06-16-04, 01:05 AM   #6
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From: Bmore, Murderland
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yo im uppin this battle to get some votes i need it to get closed
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Old 06-16-04, 10:45 AM   #7
JSmoove
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this was one of the most one-sided battles I've ever seen on RB.

BigPimp: Your structure was o'kay, but your rhymes were wack. You put no thought into 'em. Sounded like elementary playground rhymes or some sheezy. You had no punches (well, none worth mentioning). I have one more word for you son...ELEVATE!

Street: good struct...good personals...punches were on point. You didn't need to put much effort in this one. It was over before it began.

vote: Street
 
Old 06-16-04, 10:58 AM   #8
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Bigpimpn'

So u want me to rhyme to get in your crew//
oh muthafucka i got news for you//
NOPE WEAKEST OPENER I'VE SEEN 3/10
Street ;egend yea thats false//
your as stree as Joe Walsh//
WHO THE FUCKS JOE WALSH OH WELL NOT GOOD 2/10
Niggas like you don't fuck with me//
Cause i won't take any of your S.H.I.T//
WHO IT FELL EVEN DEEPER DOWN A TUNNEL 0/10
i've looked at your style its so fuckin weird//
to faggots like u i'm the most feared//
NO NO NO NOT GOOD AT ALL 3/10
oh and why'd u face a newb, u like it easy//
or is it cause your lyrics are cheap and cheesy//
CHEESY MAKES ME THINK OF MONEY SO WHATEVER NOT A GOOD LINE 1/10
u say your legend is it true//
what you gonna say when people ask//
NOPE NOT A VERY GOOD CLOSER AT ALL 0/10

1.5/10 COME VERY WEAK NO OFFENSE..

Street Legend

My ill scriptures cause lyrical destruction//
Im hard you weak what I look like fearin you suckas//
HAHA YOU DONT REALLY NEEDA TRY 5/10
The shit I spit leave Pimpn body scorn and clothes torn//
His minds is confused wonderin what type of shit that im on//
WHAT ARE YOU ON 4/10
People like big get encouraged to spit random words//
Shit be funny when they dont understand their own verbs//
YEP THIS WAS A OKAY PUNCH 6/10
Im a lyricist bitch, so I stay with new bars//
You a newbie you gotta fix up ya old rhymes like they do with used cars//
OKAY PROBABLY YOUR BEST LINE SO FAR 7/10
I dont kno if you noticed but im givin it to you//
Deadly and my final decision is, you not getting in the crew
NOPE NOT LIKING YOU CATZ CLOSERS 5/10
Man why'd u let that newbie out rap u//
NOPE NOT EVEN A BAR 2/10

4.8/10

VOTE STREET LEGEND

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Old 06-16-04, 01:32 PM   #9
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From: Bmore, Murderland
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uppin..............................
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Old 06-16-04, 01:41 PM   #10
MaCLuNiTiC
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yo my vote has to go to street legenend for way better hard httin punchlines and a much better flow
hey reurn faver honestley
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Old 06-16-04, 11:11 PM   #11
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bigpimpin had an okay structure to say the most weak punches, be a lil more complex too

streetlegend had better punches good structure

vote+streetlegend
 
 


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